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Corinne
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0 posted 03-24-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

  
Tragically romantic, drawing life,
creating portraits of experience,
the past mixed with future clarity.

His love imparted freely,
appearing intrepid,
but heís hu(man),
fraught with insecurities
taught as a child.
I wonder, does he cry?

A man without environs,
"relayer" of compassion and sight,
he has sipped from icy glaciers,
climbed uncaring mountains
let the desert nearly overcome.

Sweet inspiration, as rivers flow
virtually overwhelming,
he hastens soft alpha rhythms,
projecting peace,
babe at motherís breast,
forgetting fears.

© 2000 C.M. Bailey




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1 posted 03-24-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Corinne!  

Denise
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Very nice.  I enjoyed.
Corinne
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Thank you, Denise and Mike.  

Corinne
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Corinne, don't all Bards cry in their own way. This poem hastens soft alpha rhythms,
projecting peace, very nice.

Parker
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5 posted 03-24-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~
As always, little friend ...
beautifully done.
~*Marge*~



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Corinne,
You have a way of putting words together that I enjoy. *L*
RAM
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   this is, indeed, very beautiful - a wonderful portrait.

RAM
 
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