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Untill there was you...

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Rod17NYS
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Untill there was You..

I thought I knew myself
I thought I knew where i was,
But the only thing i really knew,
is where I've been,
And that i wish i could hide...
cuz it's a place with no hope, no peace,
where no sun would ever shine...
Untill there was You..You..
You changed my life, You made me want to smile
You set me free by making me lose myself in your arms...but there're still times, where im dragged into that same dark past, if You knew the pain, maybe You'd understand...it's cold in here..I strive to reach your hand...
But after the storm is over, Im only left with the pieaces of a confused future, and as i put them together, i see what i still got...that's the story of my life..just hope i never lose the pieaces of your heart...

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Welcome to Passions, Rod! This is a great expression of your inner feelings. Please check your email for a special welcome!

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Welcome to passions Rod  
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Welcome to the family. I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from you!
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