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Slave or Master to love?

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Tess
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0 posted 03-24-2000 10:37 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess


Slave or Master?

The softest caress I can ever remember,
Scorched my soul like a burning ember,
Bittersweet, addictive taste,
Cannot bear a moment to waste,
Flesh is stinging from your touch,
Never believed I could want this much,
I'm lost within you, and you within me.
We're bound and tied for eternity.
Who is the master? Who is the slave?
Love that was shared, and freely we gave.
Chains that bind that none do see,
Handcuffed heart won't set me free.
So take my flesh, my soul, my heart,
I'd rather die than be apart,
From you my love.


 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

© Copyright 2000 Tess - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-24-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

WOW!!!!!! Tess..i felt this one....excellent... and very passionate...WHEW  
very well written, truly...

The softest caress I can ever remember,
Scorched my soul like a burning ember,
Bittersweet, addictive taste,
Cannot bear a moment to waste,
Flesh is stinging from your touch,
Never believed I could want this much,

*SIGH*

very nice,
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Denise
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2 posted 03-24-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! This is wonderful, Tess!! Absolutely breathtaking!!

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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Tess...wonderful work. I believe I am a slave to love though at its touch, I become jello  
Tess
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4 posted 03-25-2000 06:02 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

JM and Denise thanks  
and Hoot_owl_rn I know exactly what you mean! Me too!

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

INclan
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5 posted 03-25-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Tess,

Such passion, such fire, such.....I am speachless. Surely, you must have lived it to capture it so accurately.

OUTSTANDING!

INclan
Parker
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6 posted 03-28-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Tess, Slave or Master?.... well how can I resist that question. You be the master and I'll be the slave. I'm at your command.

A Wonderful piece. no pun intended.

Parker
Mike
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7 posted 03-28-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed muchly.  Well done.
Tess
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8 posted 03-29-2000 07:12 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Inclan - Thank you and yes this was written with someone specific in mind

Haleyja - Your at my command ??  Mmmmm now that could be fun!!  

Mike - Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for letting me know


 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~


mete out
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9 posted 03-29-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Tess,
Yet another beautiful poem.
This describes, with such eloquence how it feels to be uttrly consumed with and/or by love.        
Fantastic.          Love Louise
                             xxx  


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


CherylLynnMckee
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10 posted 03-29-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

WOW...what an attention grabber...completely perfect...I really enjoy reading all your poetry..

 
Tess
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11 posted 03-31-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Louise

Thanks for your support!!!  

Hugz

Cheryl Lynn… Thanks so much…it's a buzz to know people are reading..and enjoying!


 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~


 
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