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Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 03-24-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise

Shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise
relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies
casting a relative design in honor of respect
for the individual who gives off such an effect

Relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies
silhouettes dance among other's smiling eyes
a shadow it seems was her only will to reflect
till happiness offered her the beauty to connect

Casting a relative design in honor of respect
now presenting a much more posed subject
before she believed in the sweet simple lies
dropped into her mind by sweet talking guys

For the individual who gives off such an effect
her evening shadows have come to perfect
that within the beauty of self if one complies
shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise


[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-24-2000).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 03-24-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LD you've done it again. Shadows in disguise...I love this thought! You took it and ran with it, what a lovely way to think about it. Down right Awesome writing  
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2 posted 03-24-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

For the individual who gives off such an effect
her evening shadows have come to perfect
that within the beauty of self if one complies
shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise
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what a beautiful, peaceful poem...
lovley and calming to read...
just beautiful Dreamer...
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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3 posted 03-24-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful Gloria! I love the repetition of the lines too!  

Denise
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4 posted 03-24-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

The mirrored wall hanging of all your compliments
blessing my reflective out shinning endearment
tomorrow's road to achievement is echoed by you
all in the victory of your reflection in my minds view

Blessing my reflective out shinning endearment
the kindness you all possess is my enrichment
as hours tick by and days grow long it leaves few
with much time to give appreciation as you all do.

Tomorrow's road to achievement is echoed by you
for my inspirations are designed as an inner clue
that springs from your approval granting firmament
so I thank all my readers for giving me contentment

All in the victory of your reflection in my minds eye
do I have the motivation to continue on and comply
this creative venture that becomes from blueprints
of the mirrored wall hanging of all your compliments




[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-24-2000).]
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Clever, clever  
Denise
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Your poems are amazing, Gloria!  

Denise
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Ruth, and Denise, Thank you very much for reading and responding, sorry I am not as creative with a reply as I was above but know I love ya just the same.
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8 posted 03-25-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostDreamer~

Nobody does it better than this !
~*Marge*


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Lost Dreamer--both poems are super!!
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10 posted 03-25-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

L.D
Very beautiful piece. From now on when I see my shadow I'll think of you.
Tracie


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Anne Rooks
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11 posted 03-25-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Marge: Thank You very much  

Martie: Thank you, glad you enjoyed them

Tracie: How sweet a thought, Thank you

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Wow...these are some of your best, LD. You certainly have a way with words...
Lost Dreamer
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Sharon: Thank You very much, I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed.
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As one of your readers, I thank you...this is wonderful writing!

~ Claire
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15 posted 03-25-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

LD,
I loved the shadows theme here.  It is wonderful!!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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16 posted 03-26-2000 07:54 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Meadowmuse: Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed

Lone Wolf: Thank you very much
Nan
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Ah yes.... a wonderful poem... and then its shadow... very nice, Gloria...
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Being 'shadows', I am touched by this poem. Very beautiful concept.

 ~shadows dance by the light within~

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19 posted 03-26-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Nan: Thank you so much

passing shadows: Thank you glad you enjoyed

May you all glow in your shadows
today, tomorrow and forever.

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Lost Dreamer, as one of the sweet talking guys, this speaks with wonderful lines.
Bravo!

Parker
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21 posted 03-29-2000 06:17 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Parker, Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed.
Elizabeth Santos
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Lost Dreamer
These are beautiful, beautiful thoughts, placed perfectly on the page. A very enjoyable read, clever, and well written.
Excellent!
Liz
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Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!
Lost Dreamer ... can you tell how much I love this piece ?!  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon





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Elizabeth: Thank You very much

Pepper: I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thanks for reading and your kind comment.  
 
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