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angelswing
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0 posted 03-24-2000 04:34 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angelswing


Multi-Coloured spectrum .

Life is deep,
3 dimensions,
are itís home,
nothing is ever black or white,
only shades of chrome .
Itís light is always moving,
With light you must keep pace,
Or youíll dwell to long in shadows,
You always, must hold face .
Never quite clear enough,
The sun sets,
The rainbow shades are in your mind,
Not in matter nets,
You know you never can reach,
That massive pot of gold,
You can struggle and can rush,
Just to get hopes fooled,
So just give up,
Settle for that bleak grey,
That surrounds your mind,
Then may be one day,
You will see the sun,
And the full colour to,
That lives in fantasy,
By the abysses darkest rule .
All have a belonging,
A flavour,
And a time,
As clouds float by,
My mind cries .
A tear within,
A terrible din,
My brothers,
And my kin,
Enjoy lives beauty,
Push out the grey,
You never know,
One day .
The skiís will clear,
Shed no tear,
For the minds deception isnít so shear .

Written by Tom Baker .
    


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
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angelswing
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1 posted 03-24-2000 04:37 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Sorry about the spelling, when I put this up I was in a bit of a rush !
Enjoy - Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
Enola
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2 posted 03-24-2000 05:34 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

So just give up,
Settle for that bleak grey,
That surrounds your mind,
Then may be one day,
You will see the sun,

Is it just me, or are you seeing the light (pun not intended?  Could it just be that the grey is an entire rainbow that you aren't seeing properly?


 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
TerryW
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3 posted 03-24-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

I like it!  the theme rings true!  his one is great....    
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 03-24-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tom...welcome to passions. It's very simple to correct anything you wish to correct after you've posted by clicking on the edit button at the top of the page...it's the one with the pen and paper. Welcome to passions  
Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 03-24-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Again , welcome to passions ,
An interesting piece ,with an interesting subject . Seek the vibrant colors .
Doc
angelswing
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6 posted 03-29-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thanks to you all .

Debs - Yes I am seeing the light only it isn't doing me any good .
Terry.W - Cheers mate, I can see that we have alot in common .
Hoot - thanks for the tip .
Doc - Thanks, I am seeking, just not finding .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
infinat3 sadn3ss
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7 posted 03-29-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

tom
   try looking deeper into the abyss of black and you will see it only contains white.your writing has/is improving so much ,and hope thats it keeps up this emotional quality/
Poet deVine
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8 posted 03-29-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good...I like this.  
angelswing
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9 posted 04-14-2000 04:23 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thank you both for your kind words, I am feeling alot deeper and more wise already, and I can see what your geting at cabe .


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