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~Close Your Eyes...Come To Me~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 03-24-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

Close your eyes and come to me,
this between us is meant to be.
Dream this dream that we both share,
take my hand, take me there.

Close your eyes and breath me in,
feel my touch, this innocent sin.
See the flame of candles glowing,
surrender to these passions flowing.

Close your eyes and lift up to me,
Body and Soul, Spirit free,
Envision all of this fantasy's pleasures,
moments of elation ... ours to treasure.

Close your eyes and lay your body down,
in my essence...sweetly drown.
Whisper your secrets, say my name,
in these moments, hearts know no shame.

Close your eyes, and feel my embrace,
surrender will deliver us in its grace.
As two become one...we'll make this discovery,
close your eyes then come to me...together we'll know ecstasy.

Janet Marie


for my partner in rhyme...thank you for the inspiration.


 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman






[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 03-24-2000).]
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Broken Wings
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1 posted 03-24-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

Speechless, this is truly BEAUTIFUL! WOW!  


take care,
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 03-24-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Smiling...oh to have a partner in rhyme like that  
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 03-24-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

J.M.
This was AMAZING!!!  I was going to try to pick my favorite part but I just couldn't!!  Beautiful, touching and written with the light and love of your heart and soul instead of the darkness.  You have such an amazing gift.

*AWHs* my friend and sister of my soul   You are Awesome!!!!!


 Whatever strength I add to myself becomes my greatest weakness, while whatever weakness I'll consciously endure will be replaced with a strength that is not my own.
G. Finley

Tess
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4 posted 03-24-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

this is a wonderful poem JM

Close your eyes and lift up to me,
Body and Soul, Spirit free,

I think these are my favorite lines and the ones that embody what you are conveying in this poem.

A beautiful soft touching tribute to your love.





 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

TerryW
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5 posted 03-24-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Love this poem!  This is truly an emotionally strong, heartfelt feeling.  Great Job!
Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 03-24-2000 12:42 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

This certainly brings back memories ...
and they're good ones too!

Rex}<{{{{o>
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 03-24-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Janet,
Wonderful poem, good thoughts, good words, well done.
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8 posted 03-24-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Janet Marie~
Very enjoyable and thought-provoking.
~*Marge*~


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Meadowmuse
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9 posted 03-24-2000 02:04 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Such potent poetic seduction...so nicely written.

~ Claire
christies heart
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10 posted 03-24-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Ditto to all the comments above. You're poetry is always so beautiful, and awe inspiring. I also think you could corner the market on romance novel writing if you ever took a stab at it!   Chris..

 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer


David2
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11 posted 03-24-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

such lovely thoughts, whomeer comes will be quite lucky.
       David2
Danny Holloway
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12 posted 03-24-2000 04:49 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"Close your eyes and breathe me in".
Wow, what a line!  Sometimes we see best with our eyes closed.
Being the romantic i am, you know i like this poem.  Excellent rhyme JM.
So nice and sensual!

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
mariee66
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13 posted 03-24-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Janet Marie~
This is so beautifully enchanting~
So beautifully seductive~
So very beautiful~

Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


Janet Marie
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14 posted 03-24-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

once again humbled...these kinds of poems come harder for me...you have no idea how much your encouragement of this one helps me grow...how does one say thank you for that?

TO ALL of you...I am in your debt poeticly  

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!
TAKE CARE,  janet marie

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Lone Wolf
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15 posted 03-24-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

JM....beautiful words.  Just loved the last stanza.  You are very lucky to be inspired in such a way!!!  It doesn't hurt to have the right inspiration either!!!!  LOL  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Martie
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16 posted 03-25-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You have written such lovely words of love with much passion.  Wonderful!
just_another_fe
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17 posted 03-25-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

Gee Wizz  lol everyone already said it all so ill just say i agree with them i love it and it is beautiful. great job on this
Aimster
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18 posted 03-31-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

I have an emergency...my computer is smoking big time!!! LOL....Wowza...the girl is on fire!! In all seriousness, this was just plain GOOD! Where you been keeping this part of your writing at? You leave the Aimster in awe again. Kudos to such beautiful writing!

AMY  
love ya.

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Elizabeth Santos
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19 posted 04-01-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Janet Marie,
How I am enjoying your poetry. This one is so tender and passionate, very well written.
There are lots of wonderful phrases here
Liz
ESP
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20 posted 04-01-2000 04:11 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is beautiful as is all of your other poetry. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

kitkat
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21 posted 04-01-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

JM-This was a lovely poem.I have not post replies much do to my busy schedule but want you to know I have enjoyed reading your poetry. You are a giftef writer.
 
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