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*Tis Love's Design*

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devina
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0 posted 03-24-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

My soul falls hush
With a whisper
From your lips…

Softly coated words
Sway ‘tween you and I
In undying kiss…

The sweet melody
Of your heartbeat
Completely mocks mine…

And lulls me off
To dreamland-
In a moments time…

We will not falter…
*‘Tis love’s design*





 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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Michael
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1 posted 03-24-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I hear your whispers, I feel your heart.
There will be no faltering here.
Thank you, Sweetness.


Michael
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2 posted 03-24-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

mmmmmm i just love "desire by design"...(smile)
beautiful poem of longing and promise devina.
take care jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


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Nice opening stanza, devina...
"My soul falls hush
With a whisper
From your lips…"

.. nice follow up too..
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