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Sing of My Love

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Sven
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0 posted 03-24-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Light of my life, you have emerged from my heart's own darkness
Leaving the darkness of your own heart to bring me back
Giving me the strength to break these chains of hate
Showing me the courage that for so long I felt I lacked
Your voice singing the song of love to which my heart hearkens

Spirit of my heart, you have awakened my senses with your gentle touch
Making my skin tingle with the kiss of your gentle caress
Awakening in me feelings unknown for so long
Helping me find the love I've waited for a lifetime to possess
I'll never be able to repay you, for you have given me so very much

Lover of my soul, you have stirred in me the coals of passion's fire
Fanning the flames higher with a mere wave of your hand
Stirring my mind with the depth of your yearning
Hours spent with you seeming like minutes, grains of sand
I've always known it could be like this, my heart's own desire.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 03-24-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Interesting rhyme scheme you choose for this one. I like it  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-24-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I see that little song bird we know and love has inspired you again...(smile)
this is beautiful Sven and full of the romantic heart we have come to expect in your poetry...

thank you so very much for the sweet reply to my poem tonight...you made me smile BIG TIME...
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


Broken Wings
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3 posted 03-24-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

Aah....I love the sound of this kind of music....I'm glad this is the last poem I'll read tonite....my soul will be singing tonite.  

BEAUTIFUL SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!


take care,
Broken Wings


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-IYANLA VANZANT

Tess
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4 posted 03-24-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

A beautiful poem
I love the first line where you say emerged from my hearts own darkness (hope I got that right! I forgot to type it down!!)
This sings from a heart filled with love Sven.
Thanks for sharing it with us  


 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Corinne
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5 posted 03-24-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Sven,

you describe the feelings of real love so beautifully, and it is so wonderful to see people who has found it!

Corinne
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 03-24-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Sven, this is very nice.  I like the unique rhyme pattern.
You always do a great job with romantic poetry.  Must be why you have a groupie of poetry lovers hanging on your every word.
Nice work.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
Nan
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7 posted 03-24-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hey Sven... Whassup with you?... Nice job here - Your work always has a uniqueness about it - amidst the constancy of romance..
TerryW
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8 posted 03-24-2000 05:00 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Sven,
    That was wonderful.  I know how you felt.  
I really enjoyed that one.
Marina
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9 posted 03-24-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Beautiful Sven, I just about got out the kleenix  box.

Marina
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 03-24-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven....beautiful words.  You muse must be smiling on you.  Very romantic...sigh.

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Sven
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11 posted 03-25-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

Hoot, the scheme just came to me, I'm always playing around with them, never one for convention me!!

Janet, thank you, it's nice to be known for something. . . glad that I can make you happy. . .

Broken Wings, thank you so much, I hope that I was able to help your heart sing a little more. . .

Tess, you're welcome. . .

Corinne, thank you . . .it's been lost for a long time. . .

Danny, I have groupies?  LOL  PLEASE!!!  I'm nobody special, just a regular guy. . .

Nan, I've always thrived on being different. . .

Terry, glad you liked, and welcome to Passions!!

Marina, you may need some more of that Kleenix later. . .

LW, thank you. . .my muse does indeed shine brightly. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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