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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-03-23 10:46 PM


Prima Volta
~*Marge Tindal*~

Una volta I met you
I fell for your chivalrous charms
Duo volte was just heavenly
laying in your arms
For me it was
Prima Volta
you said it was the same
Always I'll remember
calling out your name
In the crescendo of passion
locked in your embrace
Una volta
Duo volte
Prima volta
Perfect timing
in just one place
The music of the universe
brought us where we are today
Una volta -once is never enough
Duo volte -twice over again
Prima volta -first time
ever I saw your eyes
holding on to me
In your eyes
I realized
Heaven
waiting
there
Prima
Volta
I'd do it all over again



© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-03-23 10:52 PM


What emotion there is in this piece! I love it, Marge!

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


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2 posted 2000-03-23 11:00 PM


Marge, I get one heck of a volta just reading this! It's beautiful  
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3 posted 2000-03-23 11:03 PM


Marge, you gave me a volt shock too, love your poetry. Sy
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4 posted 2000-03-23 11:15 PM


Elizabeth~
Thank you for liking.
I'm known to be an emotional sort of gal !

Balladeer~
Yeah, I'd volunteer to be your
'voltage regulator' any day of the week.
Seriously, you know I appreciate you !

Seymour~
Glad to 'jump-start' you !  
Have you had your amperage checked ?  
Seriously .. thank you, my friend.

*And just for the record ...
our gal Lizzie made me come up with
another 'romantic' post this evening !
Where are you, Lizzie ?  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2000-03-23 11:48 PM


Lovely  
Loneheart
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6 posted 2000-03-23 11:54 PM


As always tis but a masterpiece
loved it Marge

 Loneheart

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Hoot~
Thank you.

LoneHeart~
You just say the nicest things.
I thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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devina
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8 posted 2000-03-24 01:07 AM


This is too good Marge...course I've always loved your way with words....

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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9 posted 2000-03-24 01:26 AM


SHOCKING ISN'T IT...

always creative and imaginative...our sweet margie-girl.  
read one of her poems... then SMILE
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



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10 posted 2000-03-24 02:31 AM


Marge this is just gorgeous...don't know what's going on over there these days, but I'll have whatever 'mom' is having...
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11 posted 2000-03-24 06:59 AM


Devina~
And you, young lady get a great big hug !
What a refreshing touch of friendship
you are.

Janet Marie~
And 'always' I am pleased
to see your kind responses.

Serenity~
I would just 'know' that you'd
like it, little friend.
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2000-03-24 07:59 AM


Lets REVOLT!!





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-24-2000).]

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13 posted 2000-03-24 08:05 AM


Nan~
OH ... I like your little revolution !
I guess as long as no one finds it
revolting .... I'm okay, huh ?  
~*Marge*~



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14 posted 2000-03-24 11:01 AM


OOHHH Marge I love this poem..at first I wasn't sure..but then it grew on me as I read it...and then the ending...!!! It made it complete...and when I read it the second time...it all came together so well

Fantastic!

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle


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15 posted 2000-03-24 11:14 AM


Very romantic, It of course produced the effect of longing for a loved one in me. Great poem, marge, I really enjoyed it.
     David2

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16 posted 2000-03-24 12:33 PM


Marge,
     I can feel the electricity in this piece! It is abaolutely wonderful!  Love the high intensity charge!

 

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17 posted 2000-03-24 12:55 PM


You'd have to plug me in to get any volta
But you've got my attention
that's for sure

Rex}<{{{{o>

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18 posted 2000-03-24 01:12 PM


What a turn of the poetic word, Marge...this one is beauty in verse.

~ Claire

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19 posted 2000-03-24 01:33 PM


Tess~
Thank you so much.  Guess that's all a poet can hope for ... that it all comes together for the reader.

David2~
Ahhh!  Mission accomplished.

TerryW~
Gosh, I'm glad you found it electrifying !
Perhaps it should come with a caution label?


Rex~
Plugged in ! !  

Claire~
It just seemed so natural.
Thank you .. you have to know
that I value your reads!  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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