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Prima Volta

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Marge Tindal
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Prima Volta
~*Marge Tindal*~

Una volta I met you
I fell for your chivalrous charms
Duo volte was just heavenly
laying in your arms
For me it was
Prima Volta
you said it was the same
Always I'll remember
calling out your name
In the crescendo of passion
locked in your embrace
Una volta
Duo volte
Prima volta
Perfect timing
in just one place
The music of the universe
brought us where we are today
Una volta -once is never enough
Duo volte -twice over again
Prima volta -first time
ever I saw your eyes
holding on to me
In your eyes
I realized
Heaven
waiting
there
Prima
Volta
I'd do it all over again


© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 03-23-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What emotion there is in this piece! I love it, Marge!

Elizabeth

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2 posted 03-23-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marge, I get one heck of a volta just reading this! It's beautiful  
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Marge, you gave me a volt shock too, love your poetry. Sy
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4 posted 03-23-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth~
Thank you for liking.
I'm known to be an emotional sort of gal !

Balladeer~
Yeah, I'd volunteer to be your
'voltage regulator' any day of the week.
Seriously, you know I appreciate you !

Seymour~
Glad to 'jump-start' you !  
Have you had your amperage checked ?  
Seriously .. thank you, my friend.

*And just for the record ...
our gal Lizzie made me come up with
another 'romantic' post this evening !
Where are you, Lizzie ?  
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 03-23-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lovely  
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6 posted 03-23-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

As always tis but a masterpiece
loved it Marge

 Loneheart
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7 posted 03-24-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Hoot~
Thank you.

LoneHeart~
You just say the nicest things.
I thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This is too good Marge...course I've always loved your way with words....

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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SHOCKING ISN'T IT...

always creative and imaginative...our sweet margie-girl.  
read one of her poems... then SMILE
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
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Marge this is just gorgeous...don't know what's going on over there these days, but I'll have whatever 'mom' is having...
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Devina~
And you, young lady get a great big hug !
What a refreshing touch of friendship
you are.

Janet Marie~
And 'always' I am pleased
to see your kind responses.

Serenity~
I would just 'know' that you'd
like it, little friend.
~*Marge*~


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Lets REVOLT!!





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-24-2000).]
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Nan~
OH ... I like your little revolution !
I guess as long as no one finds it
revolting .... I'm okay, huh ?  
~*Marge*~



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OOHHH Marge I love this poem..at first I wasn't sure..but then it grew on me as I read it...and then the ending...!!! It made it complete...and when I read it the second time...it all came together so well

Fantastic!

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

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Very romantic, It of course produced the effect of longing for a loved one in me. Great poem, marge, I really enjoyed it.
     David2
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Marge,
     I can feel the electricity in this piece! It is abaolutely wonderful!  Love the high intensity charge!

 
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You'd have to plug me in to get any volta
But you've got my attention
that's for sure

Rex}<{{{{o>
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What a turn of the poetic word, Marge...this one is beauty in verse.

~ Claire
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Tess~
Thank you so much.  Guess that's all a poet can hope for ... that it all comes together for the reader.

David2~
Ahhh!  Mission accomplished.

TerryW~
Gosh, I'm glad you found it electrifying !
Perhaps it should come with a caution label?


Rex~
Plugged in ! !  

Claire~
It just seemed so natural.
Thank you .. you have to know
that I value your reads!  
~*Marge*~


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