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vandana
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0 posted 2000-03-23 06:41 PM



I can't wait,
I can't wait,
I can't wait for you,
I can't can't wait forever,
To know you,
Time won't let me hold you,
You said you're coming home,
I can't wait for you,
I want to love you ,
I missed you so much,
I'm exicted that
you're finally coming home,
Hope you were missing me
Like I was missing you ,
I missed you so much,
So that's why Iam so happy
to see you again,
And I can't wait for you,
I can't wait,

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-23 08:26 PM


Sometimes the waiting seems like forever. I hope your waiting is over soon!

Denise

Mike
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2 posted 2000-03-23 08:31 PM


Sounds like someone is a little anxious.
Nice poem Vandana.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-03-23 08:31 PM


Hi there, little VanDana~
Somebody is anxiously awaiting the
arrival of someone special ...
I like the enthusiasm of your anticipation.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-03-23 08:46 PM


Vandana
I know how you feel. I don't mean to pry, but......(who is he?). Whoever he is, Glad he's finally coming home. Your poem certainly reflects your excitement.
Liz

David2
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5 posted 2000-03-23 08:52 PM


Vandana,
   You've aroused my excitement also! I hope he gets home soon. I enjoyed your work.
          David2  

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-03-23 11:34 PM


The waiting is the hard part      



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