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I can't wait

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vandana
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0 posted 03-23-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I can't wait,
I can't wait,
I can't wait for you,
I can't can't wait forever,
To know you,
Time won't let me hold you,
You said you're coming home,
I can't wait for you,
I want to love you ,
I missed you so much,
I'm exicted that
you're finally coming home,
Hope you were missing me
Like I was missing you ,
I missed you so much,
So that's why Iam so happy
to see you again,
And I can't wait for you,
I can't wait,
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1 posted 03-23-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sometimes the waiting seems like forever. I hope your waiting is over soon!

Denise
Mike
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2 posted 03-23-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Sounds like someone is a little anxious.
Nice poem Vandana.
Marge Tindal
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Hi there, little VanDana~
Somebody is anxiously awaiting the
arrival of someone special ...
I like the enthusiasm of your anticipation.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 03-23-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Vandana
I know how you feel. I don't mean to pry, but......(who is he?). Whoever he is, Glad he's finally coming home. Your poem certainly reflects your excitement.
Liz
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5 posted 03-23-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Vandana,
   You've aroused my excitement also! I hope he gets home soon. I enjoyed your work.
          David2  
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The waiting is the hard part      


 
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