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couldnt think of a title (any ideas welcome)

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infinat3 sadn3ss
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0 posted 03-23-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

Lost in a daze ,
gone to far ,
just out of reach .

Pulling my hair ,
sucking my blood ,
just like a leech .

Sun is bright ,
lightened my hair ,
just like bleach .

staring at the sea ,
staring at the sand ,
just me on a beach .

All my pupils ,
i have ,
just one lesson i have to teach .



 "all i wanna be , is washed out by the sea"
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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-23-2000 03:37 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Title: "The Lesson"
What's the lesson??????

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
infinat3 sadn3ss
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2 posted 03-24-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

im replying to send this back to the top
mete out
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3 posted 03-24-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Cabes,
I can almost taste the lonliness with this one, love.
I am somewhat useless with titles...one thing I do know is that this is a great poem, I REALLY like his one.

You must tell me, what is the lesson...?
          


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

 
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