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Tramp Poet
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Bittersweet

My darling, oh my lost darling...
I remember your laugh, your smile.
I see your beauty, laughing with glee
as we played, once so youthfully.

The tears and anguish, like the tide
wash through me with vengeance.
Iím so sorry, my love; even consumed
why did you have to leave so soon?

Thinking we had all eternity
our plans secure within tomorrow.
Yesterday destroying, today so alone
touching your things in our empty home.

Why God, why do You hate me this much?
I scream into the gale till no more will come.
I kneel in the sand, wracked with my grief
your smile, your laughter; echo bittersweet.


      DJBurt
  EndoftheRoad   3/00
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Romans 10:9-10
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Oh, this is so very sad  
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So very sad, yet beautifully written! Well done, Bleeding!

Denise
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Dan...this is one makes me want to reach for tissues. Beautiful and sad.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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Tramp Poet
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4 posted 03-24-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for Tramp Poet   Email Tramp Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tramp Poet's Home Page   View IP for Tramp Poet

thank you for the comments.
Sad, agreed
i don't much like writing them
but it's therapy...lol
bleeding


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