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can you say...duh?

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Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...


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Donít it Figger?

My darling,
thousands of times
and even more are the ways.
That I have missed an opportunity
to show you my love.

It is so difficult
for a man to express
easier a quick grope and kiss.
The little, precious things
we tend to miss.

Through the youth
of violence and abuse
a man finds it prudent to hide.
Emotions safely locked
deep down inside.

My feeble attempts
have all fallen short
now your heart is broken.
If only, I could recapture
the stupidity I spoke.

I vow to do better
feeling very stupid
big, ugly and mean.
Holding you, without a clue
counting tears hitting my jeans.

      DJBurt
EndoftheRoad  3/00
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© Copyright 2000 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 03-23-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey, at least you've realized your mistakes in time for a second chance, amny do not. Good luck and it's nice to see the sensitive side  
Denise
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2 posted 03-23-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Nice to see you again, Bleeding! This is a wonderful poem!

Denise
mete out
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


3 posted 03-23-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Bleeding,
This poem is negative in  some ways, but as hoot_owl_rn says, at least you can learn from your mistake, and by being able to post at Passions, you are helping others to learn aswell.
You are a brave man.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

PhaerieChild
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since 08-30-99
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Aloha, Oregon


4 posted 03-23-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Dan, this is so sad...I hope things will be getting better. I know it's hard on you to deal with the little things but you have loved her for a long time and we have all made mistakes. I'm glad to see you writing again. Miss you bro. Love, Sis

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...


5 posted 03-24-2000 12:57 AM       View Profile for Tramp Poet   Email Tramp Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tramp Poet's Home Page   View IP for Tramp Poet

lol i must be getting way too cryptic...
this was supposed to be funny...
you know; the buffoon, holding her
as she cries and so dumb about what
makes her tick that he spends this precious
time counting her tears...clueless
well now i've went and broke my cardinal
rule- if ya gotta explain it...
it must not be very well done!
           bleeding


  there is only one...
Romans 10:9-10
Alle'cram
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since 02-28-2000
Posts 1827
Texas


6 posted 03-28-2000 12:57 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

You big ole "teddy bear", tough guy. I like
the emotions and your making up. Now, how many tears did ya count? {smile}
(((Hugs)))
Alle'
 
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