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can you say...duh? |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Don’t it Figger? My darling, thousands of times and even more are the ways. That I have missed an opportunity to show you my love. It is so difficult for a man to express easier a quick grope and kiss. The little, precious things we tend to miss. Through the youth of violence and abuse a man finds it prudent to hide. Emotions safely locked deep down inside. My feeble attempts have all fallen short now your heart is broken. If only, I could recapture the stupidity I spoke. I vow to do better feeling very stupid big, ugly and mean. Holding you, without a clue counting tears hitting my jeans. DJBurt EndoftheRoad 3/00 (all rights reserved) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey, at least you've realized your mistakes in time for a second chance, amny do not. Good luck and it's nice to see the sensitive side  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nice to see you again, Bleeding! This is a wonderful poem! Denise |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Bleeding, This poem is negative in some ways, but as hoot_owl_rn says, at least you can learn from your mistake, and by being able to post at Passions, you are helping others to learn aswell. You are a brave man. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Dan, this is so sad...I hope things will be getting better. I know it's hard on you to deal with the little things but you have loved her for a long time and we have all made mistakes. I'm glad to see you writing again. Miss you bro. Love, Sis Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
lol i must be getting way too cryptic... this was supposed to be funny... you know; the buffoon, holding her as she cries and so dumb about what makes her tick that he spends this precious time counting her tears...clueless well now i've went and broke my cardinal rule- if ya gotta explain it... it must not be very well done! bleeding there is only one... Romans 10:9-10 |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
You big ole "teddy bear", tough guy. I like the emotions and your making up. Now, how many tears did ya count? {smile} (((Hugs))) Alle' |
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