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Past The Moonlight

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Marge Tindal
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Past The Moonlight
~*Marge Tindal*~

I will hold you in my arms
when the sun has lost it's light
Lay with you and love with you
through the longing night

Wrapped in throes of ecstasy
calling out your name
When the morning comes
we'll never be the same

Loved one come and comfort me
when the sun has lost it's light
Hold me 'til the dawn breaks
don't leave me in the night

I'll not ask anything else of you
I won't ask for you to stay
just let the dawn be breaking
before you go away




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-23-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Reminds me of a song sung years ago, "Help me make it through the night".
Marge, you are a master of poetry and I love to read your responses to poetry others write.  
Would love to know what program you use to get the great graphics and font styles.
Sure adds to your writing.
And, thank you for your nice words about my poetry.
Danny


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
Tess
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2 posted 03-23-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Marge

You have a lovely way with words..and i can relate to this one sometimes you want to just hang on to that moment just a little while longer...

Tess

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

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3 posted 03-23-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhh, another beautiful poem by Marge. Why doesn't that surprise me?!!  

Denise
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A very passionate.....I tend to see a bit of the kitten with the lion sneaking in for a peak also  
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5 posted 03-23-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Danny~
Thank you for the 'glowing' reply.
I guess I see such artistry in the
words we all paint ... so I try to
throw them on the canvas with color.

I will be happy to e-mail you this
evening with some basic info on the
graphics and 'paint'.  Most of what
I learned about the how-to's I learned
right here in Ron's Help section.
Take a moment or two and go there.
A wealth of knowledge he has imparted.
I will always thank him for challenging
me to LEARN how to use the tools that
take my words colorfully to the canvas.

Tess~
I so appreciate your response.

Denise~
I hope I ALWAYS catch you by surprise.

Hoot~
Meow !  ..... ROAR !  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,
   I love your work! I adore love poetry and yours is wonderful! I have a question though, is there a limit to the lenght of submitted poems? I have a few rather lengthy ballads and would like to kow if it is permissable to post them here. I did enjoy your poem, thanks.
        david2
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David2~
Thank you for liking what I write.
I think you'll find that love is a
very prevelant theme through a lot
of my writing.  

There are many lengthy pieces posted
here in the forum.  I don't believe
you'll find a problem with the length
of your ballads.  We'd love to see
them.

If you have any questions .. please
feel free to go to the Q&A Forum and
post your question.  A moderator will
be more than happy to assist you.
Enjoy ...
~*Marge*`


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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devina
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A heartfelt plea Marge...You and this moonlight seem to be good together!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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Wow~
I could "feel" this one~
You are the best Marge!~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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Devina~
Basking in the poetic glow of the moon!
It is a fun moon, huh?  

Mariee~
Awww ... you know I appreciate
the fact that you think so.
This one holds a special place
in my heart.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 03-23-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This is so bittersweet...just a few minutes more. I love this heartfelt work you do. It is always painted so vivdly.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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Mmmmmmarvelous Marge!  But it is only natural to want to lay in bed after a good night's ...sleep?  Hugs.
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I'll put the coffee on, oh , and how do you like your eggs ( green? )
Doc
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Let me think about this a second.  The moon, love, beautiful poetry...
yep...  I like.
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Marge,
That was a very special and moving poem.  I really appreciate the feeling it gives me.  I can relate to the need for someone special, if only for a little while.  I love the atmosphere that you generated.  I want you to know that I really enjoyed you post.  Have a great day!



 
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Marge,
I have no doubts that he will stay
I have no doubts we'll see another great poem within the next few hours
Love it
Liz
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WildChild~
I do appreciate what you see in my poetry.

Serenity~


Dr. Moose~
Coffee w/cream
Eggs Benedict
More coffee !  

Mike~
I like that you like !

TerryW~
I appreciate you letting me know
how you enjoy what I write.
Thank you very much.
Welcome to Passion's, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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Lizzie girl~
You sneaked in there.
LOL .... thank you, hon.
Now you've gone and done it ...
I was going to bed early tonight ...
you just woke the muse who wouldn't
want to disappoint YOU !  
Love you ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Very nice poem,Marge!!!!!!!
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I'd be wanting to stay for breakfast
... let's see ... what have you got ...
... Ohhh! some more of what I just had ...

Rex}<{{{{o>
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VanDana~
Hi hon .. thanks
and good to see you.  

Rex~
LOL !
More coffee ?  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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"Wrapped in throes of ecstasy
calling out your name
When the morning comes
we'll never be the same"

Wonderful poem; I espcially love the part above. It brings together the poem's message so well.



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Native American prayer


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Marge, it sounds like we can "all" relate to the message of this lovely poem you've once again gifted us with. "Just hold me like you'll never let me go..." (as John Denver wrote...)  ...... sigh........

yes, I can relate....

wonderful poem, Marge...thank you!

~ Claire
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Christie~
You are such a devoted reader and I
want you to know it is appreciated.

Claire~
Oh ... to even think this poem
would bring thoughts of John Denver
and his wonderful music to your mind ...
is one MEGA-compliment to this lady.
Thank you.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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