Paint your Picture - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

0 posted 2000-03-23 02:45 AM

I'll paint your picture on this heart of mine.
Give a sparkle to the droplet of tears.
Turn them into river of happiness.
Hue of bright colors as the backdrop.

I'll paint my vision of love all across the sky.
As you lay asleep with a serene look.
My arms around you holding you tightly.
Ripe as an apple your lips with the color red.

Drive away all your fears your darkest dreams.
I'll paint you dream that makes you smile like a child.
Taking you for a ride on my chariot of fire.
Far amongst the stars that shone brightly for us.

And when I play my serenade just for you.
I'll paint the notes with the color of my love.
Whispering lullaby that even mother nature applauds.
Joining me in chorus praising your beauty.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2000-03-23 02:53 AM

This is some beautiful writing you've done here...lovely thoughts!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

2 posted 2000-03-23 02:56 AM

Thanks devina! I am glad you liked it.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2000-03-23 04:00 AM

WOW!!!

Romantic and sweet...full of love!!Where are these lovely new poets coming from..I'll paint my vision of love all across the sky.
As you lay asleep with a serene look.
My arms around you holding you tightly.
Ripe as an apple your lips with the color red.And when I play my serenade just for you.
I'll paint the notes with the color of my love.
Whispering lullaby that even mother nature applauds.
Joining me in chorus praising your beauty.

THESE ARE A FEW OF MY FAVORITE THINGS....

"Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

4 posted 2000-03-23 06:00 AM

) Hi, I've been here for sometime now, except that I've not been regular lately, so very sad

(
Glad you like this one and thanks!

Rgds,
Neitham

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-03-23 06:49 AM

Neitham~
You need to share your 'paintings'
with us more often.
This spoke of love in lovely image.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

6 posted 2000-03-24 12:48 PM

Thanks Marge.Am a great fan of yours, I love those great poems of yours.
Rds,
neitham

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2000-03-24 03:15 AM

Oh, this is a romantically beautiful poem. It's nice to see you back around Neitham

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.