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neitham
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since 12-29-1999
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India


0 posted 03-23-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

I'll paint your picture on this heart of mine.
Give a sparkle to the droplet of tears.
Turn them into river of happiness.
Hue of bright colors as the backdrop.

I'll paint my vision of love all across the sky.
As you lay asleep with a serene look.
My arms around you holding you tightly.
Ripe as an apple your lips with the color red.

Drive away all your fears your darkest dreams.
I'll paint you dream that makes you smile like a child.
Taking you for a ride on my chariot of fire.
Far amongst the stars that shone brightly for us.

And when I play my serenade just for you.
I'll paint the notes with the color of my love.
Whispering lullaby that even mother nature applauds.
Joining me in chorus praising your beauty.

© Copyright 2000 JK.Neitham - All Rights Reserved
devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


1 posted 03-23-2000 02:53 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is some beautiful writing you've done here...lovely thoughts!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

neitham
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India


2 posted 03-23-2000 02:56 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Thanks devina! I am glad you liked it.

A Romantic Heart
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since 09-03-99
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Forever In Your Heart


3 posted 03-23-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

WOW!!! Romantic and sweet...full of love!!Where are these lovely new poets coming from..I'll paint my vision of love all across the sky.
As you lay asleep with a serene look.
My arms around you holding you tightly.
Ripe as an apple your lips with the color red.And when I play my serenade just for you.
I'll paint the notes with the color of my love.
Whispering lullaby that even mother nature applauds.
Joining me in chorus praising your beauty.

THESE ARE A FEW OF MY FAVORITE THINGS....


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

neitham
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since 12-29-1999
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India


4 posted 03-23-2000 06:00 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

) Hi, I've been here for sometime now, except that I've not been regular lately, so very sad  (
Glad you like this one and thanks!

Rgds,
Neitham
Marge Tindal
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since 11-06-1999
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


5 posted 03-23-2000 06:49 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Neitham~
You need to share your 'paintings'
with us more often.
This spoke of love in lovely image.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

neitham
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India


6 posted 03-24-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Thanks Marge.Am a great fan of yours, I love those great poems of yours.
Rds,
neitham
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


7 posted 03-24-2000 03:15 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh, this is a romantically beautiful poem. It's nice to see you back around Neitham  
 
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