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~Seduction Of Words~ sincere thanks :)

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 03-23-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

~Seduction Of Words~

Bound by trust,
Laced with lust,
Intensity defined by intrigue.

Longing veiled in verse,
Passion's welcomed curse,
Rapture adorned in rhyme.

Depth of perception
Fantasy's sweetest deception,
Reverie embraces reality in reprieve.

Seduction by prose,
Gifted to compose,
Inspiration's vows requited.

Eyes of desire,
Drawn to the fire,
A slow burning sensual flame.

Discoveries of mutual need,
Hunger upon which to feed,
Salvation found in sacrifice.

Secrets protected and hidden,
Tasting pleasures forbidden,
Offerings consume and satisfy.

Resistance in decline,
Submission so divine,
Abandon assures absolution.

Temptation born of fascination,
Captivation by poetic invitation,
Surrender entwined in ecstasy.

Janet Marie


                    

                  



 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman






[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 03-24-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
David2
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1 posted 03-23-2000 02:13 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Janet Marie,
   I simply loved this and especially these lines. Great work!
                David2

Temptation born of fascination,
Captivation by poetic invitation,
Surrender entwined in ecstasy.


                    


Marina
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2 posted 03-23-2000 02:14 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is one of your best JM! I really like it.  Particarly your rhyme scheme.

Marina
christies heart
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3 posted 03-23-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

I agree with above comments.This is great and provoking!

 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer


Tess
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4 posted 03-23-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

I love the three line rhyming structure..it gives great rhythm to the words and the way that each verse builds on the next..increasing like the fire image....until the surrender at the end.

Tess

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 03-23-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Janet Marie,
Oh, what a wonderful poem! I am overwhelmed.
Talent galore from your poet pen.
Liz
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 03-23-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

The title is appropriate here.  The words flow and the seduction is complete.  
Janet Marie you have such wonderful poetic expression.  I study your work hopeing to be that good someday.
Thank you for responding to my posts.
Danny
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 03-23-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

You couldn't have picked a more perfect title...I absolutely love your word choices in this one  
serenity blaze
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8 posted 03-23-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Perfection again!  Almost knocked over the laptop when I gave the screen a "high-five"!
Just beautiful, Janet!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 03-23-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Its only words...and words are all I have to seduce your heart away.  A true ecstasy.  James
A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 03-23-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This was one of your best...I ditto the above remarks!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 03-23-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Janet Marie~
This is an exquisite piece of poetry,
my dear.
A favorite it is destined to become.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie
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12 posted 03-23-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wow!  Wonderful words..to read and to speak and to listen to. Very well done!!
Sven
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13 posted 03-23-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

JM, this is truly wonderful. . . I can only say that I hope that whoever you have found appreciates the wonder and the desire that shows in these poems. . . .

I love this side of you!!!  So wonderful to see it!!

-----------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Loneheart
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14 posted 03-23-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

JM truly outstanding to say the least


 Loneheart
TerryW
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15 posted 03-24-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Janet,
    I was almost knocked over by this one.  Such intensity fading to softness, then building in intensity to the crescendo --- you are remarkable!


 Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Janet Marie
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16 posted 03-24-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I gotta tell you guys...you made my week, month,life, with your replies to this...
honestly...I am humbled by ALL of you who encouraged me...
You never know which one is one that will evoke something in others...
I'm so complimented this one did that for you.

thank you and welcome to David2, Tess and Terry W...very nice to have you here with us...

Liz, coming from a poet of your caliber...I am truly humlbed...hopefully I am worthy(smile)
SAME SAID AS ABOVE to-- Margie, Marina, Christie, Martie, Romantic Heart and HOOT
thank YOU ladies... your too kind

Danny...you have no idea how complimented I was by your words...again...THANK YOU!

Sven...thank you for helping make me feel comfortable...expressing this "side of me"

serentiy...HON dont break your puter!!
how will you post your beautiful poems...

LoneH...thank you for the very KIND words.

James...ALL your words seduce us...you are superb.

THANKS GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOUR THE REASON PASSIONS IS HOME!!!!!

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Balladeer
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17 posted 03-24-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I see I'm late getting to the parade but let me add my sincere appreciation of this poem. It is truly excellent....a work to be proud of.  
VampDude
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18 posted 03-25-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for VampDude   Email VampDude   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit VampDude's Home Page   View IP for VampDude

Wow, truly and amazing poem, very intense.. I like it a lot, great work!

 "So close, no matter how far,
couldn't be much more from the heart,
forever trusting who we are,
and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-
Nan
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19 posted 03-26-2000 08:05 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Um.... I was out with Balladeer... Is it too late to say this is a piece well done??... It was all his fault - I would've been here sooner.. I would've..
Janet Marie
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20 posted 03-26-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Balladeer...hon, the parade cant start with out you...so your NEVER late...thank you so much for the kind words...

Vampdude...THANK YOU and WELCOME!!!  
we look forward to your work.

Nan...you have a very good excuse...I can see how Balladeer could be a distraction  ..
thanks for the read and kind reply.

THANK YOU...ALL of you... ALWAYS!!!!!!!
take care , jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Corinne
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21 posted 03-26-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

What I like about this poem is its duality.
It could from you and about you, it could be about Passions, heck, or it could be both!

Corinne
Aimster
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22 posted 04-01-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Hope I'm not too late for the party   SMILES! Janet, this was really great hon! I loved the rhyming scheme...different than most of your others. But it worked so well. I also loved the flow of it, and how each verse left u wanting more, and then u were so elequotently (sp) surprised by the next one! Congrats again my friend, u take my breath away!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
 
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