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Reverie's Design

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Meadowmuse
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Reverie's Design




There is a place I visit
that you and I have shared
Alone in muse's calling,
I often find you there

I find you there in dreamlight
in golds and greens, subdued
My hands, your face, caressing,
Your warmth, my skin's renewed

The tender trance of breathing
so close, in touch and song
Our dreams have come awaking
No more, need we prolong

You take me to your lap there,
your eyes glow candlefire
Our blood ignites with touching
Pulsing pounds us with desire

I face you in my longing,
and feel yours climbing high
The throbbing point of passion,
never more can we deny

   ~   ~   ~

And in the afterwhispers
when greens and golds decline

I ache to realize, my love,
'twas reverie's design



Dear LadyClaire



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1 posted 03-23-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I suppose there are those who would feel fortunate to have a dream such as this

Rex}<{{{{o>
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Meadow,
Excellent, beautifully done. Sy
Janet Marie
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3 posted 03-23-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh the things you do with that poetic pen of yours...this is perfection Claire...
truly, your words have such a calming peaceful effect on me...
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


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4 posted 03-23-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Lost in the land of reverie... without design.. what a concept!!.. Very nice, Claire.. I love this one..
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5 posted 03-23-2000 07:58 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Claire~
This is so lovely.
The nicest things happen by dreams 'design'.
Your quill is moving across the page
with enchanting beauties from your heart.
~*Marge*~


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Danny Holloway
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6 posted 03-23-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

If I understood the finest compliments of poetry style and expression I would extend them all to you for the wonderful poetry you write.
I hope to write like you someday.
also, thank you for responding to my poem.
Danny

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Claire...you words always strike a chord in my heart....beautiful  
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I too wish I could write as beautifully as you do, Claire. I can always feel what you are writing. Absolutely beautiful!

Denise
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I liked the recurring gold and greens line in this poem..well actually i liked all of it..but that stood out..brought it full circle for me  

A lovely poem

Tess

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10 posted 03-23-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

A beautiful poem, with beautiful lines......


And in the afterwhispers
when greens and golds decline

I ache to realize, my love,
'twas reverie's design


Just lovely.... David2
Michael
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11 posted 03-23-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Whew - this one sure sweeps a person away.  Wonderful poem, Claire.


Michael
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12 posted 03-23-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Claire..you take a dream and make it real. This is so touching and so beautifully written.
In the afterwhispers....I really love that line.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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I love the way you write Claire...with such passionate whispers.
Meadowmuse
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Rex...I do feel fortunate to have this dream, but alas, that is all it is...merely phantasy's finding. I thank you, so, for reading.

Seymour...thank you, dear poet, for being so nice.

Janet Marie...to elicit a peacefulness in one who reads my work brings pleasure to me. Thank you, in earnest, for your response.

Nan...thank you, for reading, enjoying, and letting me know.  

Marge...what I find enchanting are your lovely responses to poetry that moves you. Thank you so much.

Danny...no matter, for I do not understand them either. That you read my poem and found it worthy of a response is all the compliment I could wish for. Thank you, sincerely.

Ruth...I'm glad. Yours find that same chord in mine.  

Denise...thank you. That you can feel it makes the writing worthwhile. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

Tess...thank you...I find golds and greens to be such inspiring colours. I'm awfully glad you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your kind commentary.

David2...your reply was very lovely, as well. Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed this poem.

Michael...I don't want to sweep you "too" far away, stay close where I can read your work!   Thanks for reading, my friend.

WildChild...Thank you, in earnest, for your generous comment. This dream, to me, "is" sometimes real. I guess we all have our share of those, don't we? I'm glad to know you enjoyed this.

Martie...and I love the way "you" write. I thank you for reading this and offering such encouraging words today.  

~ Claire


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15 posted 03-23-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Simply exquisite
Doc
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Remarkable, Meadowmuse.  Stunning, beautiful imagery, presented in an incredible form.  Wonderful work, yet again.  

 *Krista Knutson*

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Meadowmuse
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Thank you, Doc, for your gracious response.

~ Claire
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Krista, thank you! I think our posts must have crossed last night, but I wanted to thank you for reading this, and for your kind response. (and the smile!)  

~ Claire
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Claire..While I don't always have a lot of time to reply or to come online for that matter,    I am always so in awe of your talent. This poem is another example. Just beautiful!

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And what a beautiful design the reverie did weave!  This one is wonderful!  Thank you for sharing it with us!
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Truly beautiful work.  Very passionate. Your poetry is true art, Claire
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Chris...it is so encouraging knowing that you enjoyed this...thank you  

Terry...thank "you" for such a lovely response. Isn't this a wonderful place to share?  

Michael...my friend. Thank you. Your words elevate my spirit.  

~ Claire

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23 posted 03-28-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Clair, I've been on holiday's too long, but is your poetry getting alot more sensual. wow, cooling fan.

Parker
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Claire,
   Exquisite, as always
  
  "your eyes glow candlefire"
   This is lovely. I can see them.

   your talent overwhelms

Liz
 
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