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nightloy
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0 posted 03-22-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for nightloy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nightloy

Do you know my biggest fear,
What I'm scared I will one day hear.
I fear that you will tell me that we're through,
Your feelings have changed and you want someone new.
Am I right to feel this way,
Will I feel like this every day.
It is in me running through every bone,
Will I survive if I'm left alone.
Is what I'm saying just foolish cries,
Because hurt is what I really despise.

                      ~nightloy


 
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Cerenity
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1 posted 03-23-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Nightloy,

I have to say I live with this question in my heart every day and have spent many a tear on this thought. I do have good reasons to have these thoughts and all I can say is from what I have come up with is that if something happens some how I will survive, I do my best and thats all any one can do. You write from the heart this is a great poem thank you for sharing.

Welcome to passions,

Cerenity
Janet Marie
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2 posted 03-23-2000 10:47 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

hi and welcome...well written expression of your fears and need, we all feel this way sometime...very nice to have you here with us...take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


hoot_owl_rn
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We can't live our lives being afraid to fall...sometimes we just have to jump and hope we find someplace soft to land  
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