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My Beginning, My End

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NewbiePoetGuy
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Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA


0 posted 03-22-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for NewbiePoetGuy   Email NewbiePoetGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NewbiePoetGuy's Home Page   View IP for NewbiePoetGuy

We met on a cold January day
But your love made it feel like it was May
We lived and loved each other for a few weeks
Then you said "I need some time to think"
Three years was the date we set
I said I'd wait if it was your love I'd get
We grew colser and closer over the next few weeks
But then you disappeared like fog around the mountain peeks.

My life continued on, though I paid no attention to it
For without you the world is nothing more than a bottomless pit
I never realized how empty my life was until God brought us together
Now I know I'll love you forever
I pray every night that we are meant to be
That you'll come back and just love me.

People say love is the greatest gift of all
But then why does it feel like my heart has been mauled?
I cry every night that we are apart
This crying is due to my broken heart
This pain made me say and feel things I now regret
For you said you forgive me but I know you will never forget
From the very beginning my only intention was to love you, and strive to let you know how lucky I am.

To hear your beautiful, melodic voice again would bring tears of joy to my eyes
For it has brought me such joy that I can never, and will never tell you a single lie
All that is mine I would gladly give up
To touch my lips to yours just once.

You are my alpha and my omega
My beginning and my end
You to me are forever
Not some passing trend

I would sacrafice everything I hold dear
Just to forever have you near
For you I'd wait forever and a day
Because it might take that long to bring your love my way
From your path I will never stray
Because, my dear AuraLee, for me to live you are the only way.
© Copyright 2000 Larry Kelley - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-22-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Newbie~
This is soooooo sweet.
I hope she comes back into your life.
And if that doesn't happen ...
look at the beautiful memories she has
given you to write about.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poet deVine
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2 posted 03-22-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Even the painful experiences in life can be put into beautiful poetry. Good job!  
JamesMichael
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3 posted 03-23-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wow this is beautiful writing and I am very sincere and understanding about this...in your heart you found love but in her heart she said its time to move on.  James
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 03-23-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I do hope you shared this one with her  
NewbiePoetGuy
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Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA


5 posted 03-24-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for NewbiePoetGuy   Email NewbiePoetGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NewbiePoetGuy's Home Page   View IP for NewbiePoetGuy

Hey People,
thanks for all the good replies.
And Hoot_n_owl, ah i hope i spelled it right, but anyways i cant share it with her because she likes someone else now so if i did she would just say i dont feel the same way, get over it, so i have to keep it to myself, anywayz thanks again all see ya later
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia


6 posted 03-24-2000 05:47 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

I liked your style of writing - I hope love comes your way soon   Roniece  
Wishing you sunshine and smiles for your day
 
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