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Untamed

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shagirl
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since 03-20-2000
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Untamed

In my dreams in fading light
there comes a vision burning bright
A beauty soft with lithe curve
in moonlight dances, with passion serves

His fleeting gaze of clear blue eyes
framed in beauty and soulful sighs
His wild spirit is shyly hidden
a second beauty but kept within

The yearning for him all day and night
it conquers all things both wrong and right
Inner battles are won and lost
wars inspired at such a cost

he drains your soul
and brings you fire
he saves your soul
and brings you higher

All things measured all things gained
moonlit dancer heart untamed

Stay the night for now and ever
tame your heart a gentle tether
Til winters bring our ending song
stay with me and here belong

shagirl....




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WhtDove
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I think you've written a wonderful poem here!
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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Hi Shagirl,

I love this poem, exspecialy the way you went both ways like, drains your soul brings you fire and saves your soul brings you higher, this is done very nicely.

Welcome to passions,

Cerenity
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