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Tess
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0 posted 03-22-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess


Dream With Me

A soft cloud of feathers cushions my weary head,
Troublesome thoughts melt quickly into nothingness,
A smile dances on my lips,
Eyes happily close as you come to me in my dreams.

So real I can touch you, hold you close,
In my mind I have memorized you,
An imprint of you captured on my heart,
To look upon while you are gone,
As I wait and wonder,
How long will it be?
Until you are again with me.

Out the window I see the dark sky,
Laden heavy with her precious sparkling lights,
I smile again, as I picture you,
Are you looking at the stars in their beauty too.

With your name on my lips,
The window is open,
A kiss blows on the night breeze,
When you catch it will you smile,
As I do when l dream of you?

Deep sadness wraps its arms around me,
Longing to be with you,
Together in flesh,
As we are forever in heart and soul.

Your love wraps around me,
Although you're not with me,
And I dream of our love,
Together for eternity.

Tess
© Copyright 2000 Tess - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 03-22-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This poem has wonderful images and expressed your love beautifully. I enjoyed this much, thanks for sharing it here with us, and welcome to Passions.

[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-22-2000).]
Tess
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2 posted 03-22-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Thanks for the welcome

I'm glad to be here  
Sven
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3 posted 03-22-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Yes, I must agree. . . the images in this poem, along with the ones at your website, have left my mind filled with visions of Atlantis. . .

Welcome to Passions, my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

mariee66
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4 posted 03-22-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

You're going to get an Ohhh... Ahhh... Ohhh... from me~
Such beautiful words and beautiful emotions~
Lovely poem~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Tess
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5 posted 03-23-2000 08:14 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Sven - Thank you  
and I enjoy the images and the feelings that you
create in your poems too!

Mariee66  It's a lovely feeling when people enjoy my poems
Thanks  for taking the time to post a comment



 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 03-23-2000 08:34 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tess~
Lovely .. absolutely lovely.
Replete with image and softness.
Can you tell that I like it?  
~*Marge*~


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Tess
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7 posted 03-23-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Thnaks Marge  
I really appreciate your encouraging responses
First posts in a new group are always a bit nerve wracking!

Tess

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 03-23-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A wonderful dreamy vision of love in this poem. I feel like I want to go back to bed and just think. Oh no, I've got to get to work! Shucks.
Liz
David2
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9 posted 03-23-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Hi, welcome to Passions. I am very new myself and your poem was quite moving. I felt the loss you were trying to convey. Thanks for a fine piece of work!  
   David2
Tess
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10 posted 03-23-2000 09:29 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

THanks Elizabeth and David

I've enjoyed reading your work too  

Tess

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Danny Holloway
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11 posted 03-23-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Tess, let me echo the nice comments already expressed.  I enjoyed this poem.  I liked
"a kiss blows on the night breeze".
"Longing to be with you"
Wonderful expression.
Also, thanks for responding to my poem.
Danny

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
Tess
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And Thank YOU Danny for taking time to leave a comment  

Tess

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

hoot_owl_rn
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Tess..what a lovely expression of love  
Tess
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14 posted 03-23-2000 11:21 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Thanks  

Tess

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Denise
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15 posted 03-23-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very beautiful, Tess! Very well written!

Denise
Tess
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16 posted 03-24-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Thanks Denise  

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

Michael
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17 posted 03-24-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Beautiful beautiful poem, Tess.  Conveys emotion well and lovely imagery as well.


Michael
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18 posted 03-24-2000 03:23 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Gave me a smile and a touch of bittersweet longing. Beautiful imagery, wonderful emotional flow. Welcome to Passions...hope to see more.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


RobertB
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19 posted 03-24-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Yes...WELCOME Tess.... and a wonderful poem!!!

 if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.


Tess
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20 posted 03-24-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Thanks  for the welcome Michael, Wild Child  and Robert, and I've enjoyed reading your poems too  

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

TerryW
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21 posted 03-24-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Tess,
     I truly enjoyed this poem.  The imagery is so vivid and the mood is so soft, I can only read it in wonderment.  I really enjoyed your work!
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