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Child Of The Earth
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Child Of The Earth |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia 
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Child Of the Earth In the still of the night I go walking, Moon shadows tenuously follow me, Sinuously snake across the dusty ground, Leave crunch, breaking like bones beneath my feet, 'Though I step carefully. The silent stars proudly display their beauty, Against the black velvet night. Orion is my guiding light. A breeze softly stirs in the towering trees, As they quietly whisper my name, Telling my secrets to the infinite darkness. The slow moving water calls seductively to me, Let me caress you, Soothe you, Cover you with my love. Unpeeling my day skin I join her. The cold shook of contact, Awakens me momentarily from my trance, Until she rocks me smoothly, As l melt with her. We move in a duet for one in fluid motion, An unending symphony from a single refrain, Flowing through my body, Playing in my brain. Regretfully I wrench myself from the safety of her womb, Moonbeams dance across my rippled flesh, I raise my hands to the heavens, And celebrate my oneness with the earth. |
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Rosalind Palafox
Registered
MemberPosts 88 |
Thanks for the little journey....  "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tess~ What a lovely entrance you've made to the Passion's family of friends.  This poem is simply serene and in tune with oneness. Peaceful serenity awakening. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Tess, This is an absolutely fantastic poem. I read it 3 times over and each time the visuals that formed themselves in my head got more and more vivid. Fantastic.  A proud first post. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Rosalind- Happy to take you along on the journey Marge - Thanks for your comments…and the lovely welcome I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Mete Out - Thank you too for your positive comments on my first post. I was trying to re-create the scene that I had in my head. "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice imagery Tess...welcome to passions |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Thanks for the welcome Tess |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Welcome to passions! I have just arrived myself and I must tell you how much I enjoyed your work. David2 |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Wow it must be spring... everybody's out stargazing... And what's more amazing is your first poem Tess.. and , gulp, has there really never been a Tess here before..????.. Wow!!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Lovely entrance... Welcome!!!!! You've painted the picture well... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a lovely sensory poem..Welcome to Passions |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
David _ thanks and I've enjoyed reading your work too Local Rebel - amazing isnt it..when typed Tess in I thought no way….I'll have to think of something else for my name…..but there you go And its actually not spring here in Australia at the moment But yes when I wrote that it was Spring time. Devina and Martie - Thank you for the welcome I'm really enjoying all the wonderful poems that are here"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tess, this was exquisite...thank you for taking me on that lovely journey... you are an artist with your pen...welcome, nice to have you here. take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Thanks JM It's great to be here! "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
What a wonderful, sensuous journey! I can almost feel it myself! Hope to read more of your work soon! Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. And though it's not spring where you are, you've brought some of it to us with your poem!  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What a beautiful, peaceful poem! Corinne |
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