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Inseparable

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Danny Holloway
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0 posted 03-22-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Danny Holloway


                Inseparable

      I feel you,
         your soft skin,
           your flowing hair
              your heart beating

                  I hear you
              your sweet voice
           loves tender words,
       whispered, to me

       I touch you,
           your smooth neck,
              your silken body
                 soft hidden places

                 I see you,
              your unique beauty
            your delicate grace
        expressions of Love

        I smell you,
            your sweet scent
               your womanness
                  the essence of you

                  I want you
               in my senses
            in my dreams
        in my life, always

        I know you, you know me
           we are one, together
               Inseparable



 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.



[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-22-2000).]
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-22-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh man danny...BIG OLD *SIGH*..
this is so perfect and so full of your sensitive and kind ways. you always write with so much heart...
the presentation of this is perfection as well..very nice.....
lucky girl...SHE IS!!!
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


Shelley
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2 posted 03-22-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

This is so beautiful. The words just wrap around you. Surounding you!

Very nicely done!
Rosalind Palafox
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3 posted 03-22-2000 07:28 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

WOW! Who is this lucky woman? I enjoyed reading your poem. Show me more..........


 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb
Marina
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4 posted 03-22-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Wow!  I am seeing a whole new adult theme poem here.  I thinking you could start with...oh..Ehm..well I'm sure you can figure it out.

Marina
Meadowmuse
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5 posted 03-22-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Such tender words of devotion...so artfully assembled. Beautiful, Danny.

~ Claire
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 03-22-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Danny~

This is absolutely the finest render
of loving emotion on display.
It moved with the sensuality of a lover
sliding his hands over the body of love.
Awesome and romantically done.
You are precious.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


7 posted 03-22-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This is wonderful...is this as good as it gets...maybe not!!!! the best yet!!! loved it!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 03-22-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Danny
Very well written and wonderfully Romantic.
This was so enjoyable to read - very smooth flowing verse.
I liked it lots
Liz
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9 posted 03-23-2000 05:19 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Danny,
This is, yet again, a beauty.
I loved every second of it.
I adored the way that it flowed together, in a gentle gliding way that is reminisant of the way that love flows over us.
Great.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

PhaerieChild
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10 posted 03-23-2000 05:25 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Danny, this is just like a giant loving warm hug! Just wraps around your heart! Wonderful tribute to her.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


Danny Holloway
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11 posted 03-23-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

So kind of all of you to respond. There is so much wonderful poetry posted here each day that I feel honored that you took time to read and respond to mine.  Your complimentary words are much appreciated.
Thanks:  Janet Marie
           Shelley
           Rosalind Polafox
           Marina
           Meadowmuse
           Marge Tindal
           A Romantic Heart
           mete out
           Wild Child
           Elizabeth Santos
           Tess
           David2
           Hoot_Owl
           devina
           mariee66
           marina
           martie
           dsnyder
           A Romantic Heart (yes)
           Kitkat
           Nan
           Shelley (read more plese)

Your names are entered into the Holloway Poetry Sweepstakes.  


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.



[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-24-2000).]
Tess
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Words as soft and smooth and lovely as the subject you describe.

Even the presentation lends itself to the soft caressing hands sliding over her curves.
A wonderful poem..I love it  

Tess

 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

David2
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13 posted 03-23-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Danny,
    This poem moved me. It expresses the purest form of love and love poetry is what appeals to me most. The flow of the poem was wonderful, exceptionally easy to read, very well crafted.
        David2  
hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 03-23-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh my Danny...aren't we the romantic these days   And I love it!!!  
devina
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15 posted 03-23-2000 12:45 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I've never seen anything more romantic from you Danny...this was soft and sweet....

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

mariee66
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16 posted 03-23-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Wow~
This is just sooo romantic~
Beautiful, Danny!~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

Denise
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17 posted 03-23-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very romantic, Danny!

Denise
Marina
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18 posted 03-23-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

So exactly what's the grand prize???

Marina
Martie
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19 posted 03-23-2000 02:31 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Such a sensual and tender poem....just loved it!
A Romantic Heart
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20 posted 03-23-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

can you enter more than once?yes what isthe grand prize?Breakfast at Tiffinies?

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Danny Holloway
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21 posted 03-23-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Grand Prize:  
The most romantic evening you can imagine.  Starting with dinner at the Ritz, dancing till the champage runs out and then a moonlight cruise on the river Seine where the sweetest words of love and desire will be whispered in the ear of the most beautiful woman in Paris.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-23-2000).]
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


22 posted 03-23-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

And I won, right??  
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

kitkat
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23 posted 03-23-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Danny, yet another beautiful piece. Isn't it wonderful to have someone that you are inseperable from.
Shelley
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24 posted 03-24-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

Just had to read this again.  It still has the same effect.

When is the winner announced?
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