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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Inseparable I feel you, your soft skin, your flowing hair your heart beating I hear you your sweet voice loves tender words, whispered, to me I touch you, your smooth neck, your silken body soft hidden places I see you, your unique beauty your delicate grace expressions of Love I smell you, your sweet scent your womanness the essence of you I want you in my senses in my dreams in my life, always I know you, you know me we are one, together Inseparable < !signature--> A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh man danny...BIG OLD *SIGH*.. this is so perfect and so full of your sensitive and kind ways. you always write with so much heart... the presentation of this is perfection as well..very nice..... lucky girl...SHE IS!!!  take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This is so beautiful. The words just wrap around you. Surounding you! Very nicely done! |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
WOW! Who is this lucky woman? I enjoyed reading your poem. Show me more.......... "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Wow! I am seeing a whole new adult theme poem here. I thinking you could start with...oh..Ehm..well I'm sure you can figure it out. Marina |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such tender words of devotion...so artfully assembled. Beautiful, Danny. ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ This is absolutely the finest render of loving emotion on display. It moved with the sensuality of a lover sliding his hands over the body of love. Awesome and romantically done. You are precious. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This is wonderful...is this as good as it gets...maybe not!!!! the best yet!!! loved it!"Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Danny Very well written and wonderfully Romantic. This was so enjoyable to read - very smooth flowing verse. I liked it lots Liz |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Danny, This is, yet again, a beauty. I loved every second of it. I adored the way that it flowed together, in a gentle gliding way that is reminisant of the way that love flows over us. Great. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Danny, this is just like a giant loving warm hug! Just wraps around your heart! Wonderful tribute to her. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
So kind of all of you to respond. There is so much wonderful poetry posted here each day that I feel honored that you took time to read and respond to mine. Your complimentary words are much appreciated. Thanks: Janet Marie Shelley Rosalind Polafox Marina Meadowmuse Marge Tindal A Romantic Heart mete out Wild Child Elizabeth Santos Tess David2 Hoot_Owl devina mariee66 marina martie dsnyder A Romantic Heart (yes) Kitkat Nan Shelley (read more plese) Your names are entered into the Holloway Poetry Sweepstakes. < !signature--> A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Words as soft and smooth and lovely as the subject you describe. Even the presentation lends itself to the soft caressing hands sliding over her curves. A wonderful poem..I love it  Tess "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Danny, This poem moved me. It expresses the purest form of love and love poetry is what appeals to me most. The flow of the poem was wonderful, exceptionally easy to read, very well crafted. David2 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my Danny...aren't we the romantic these days And I love it!!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I've never seen anything more romantic from you Danny...this was soft and sweet.... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ This is just sooo romantic~ Beautiful, Danny!~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very romantic, Danny! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
So exactly what's the grand prize??? Marina |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Such a sensual and tender poem....just loved it! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
can you enter more than once?yes what isthe grand prize?Breakfast at Tiffinies? "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Grand Prize: The most romantic evening you can imagine. Starting with dinner at the Ritz, dancing till the champage runs out and then a moonlight cruise on the river Seine where the sweetest words of love and desire will be whispered in the ear of the most beautiful woman in Paris. < !signature--> A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-23-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
And I won, right??  Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Danny, yet another beautiful piece. Isn't it wonderful to have someone that you are inseperable from. |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Just had to read this again. It still has the same effect. When is the winner announced? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is wonderful, both in sentiment and in presentation, Dan... Nice work..  |
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