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Broken Wings
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0 posted 03-22-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Broken Wings


                                Soul Friend

I will always treasure the moments we spend together

They will always be remembered with a smile

I try to imagine how our future will be, and feelings of sadness fill my soul

An invisible chain joins us

Our pain and our happiness keep us together

I canít help but think of the day when the road that you must travel comes, and leads you away from me

A road that will lead you to a special someone

Someone who will hold your hand

Someone who will take away your fears

Someone with whom you wont have to hide your tears

Someone who will occupy all your time and thoughts

Someone who eventually will break our chain

Our destiny was to meet only in words it seems

Words that are filled with hopes and dreams

I wish I could find the right words to express my feelings for you

But which words can express the complex feelings of my soul

I wish you all the love and happiness this world can give

That special someone, is my wish for you

So when you feel me distant, donít worry

Iím just preparing for the road ahead.



 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


© Copyright 2000 ~ Vanessa ~ - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 03-22-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW Broken Wings, I have felt and still feel every word and line in your poem. Excellent work.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Danny Holloway
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2 posted 03-22-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I thought this piece was well written.
Nice wishes for someone special.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


3 posted 03-22-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This was lovely! Like soulmate, but soulfriend...nice piece of work...lucky friend!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 03-22-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

So used to the love that lets go and the love that isn't meant to be...the gaurd that is never down and trying often to prepare ourselves so we don't hurt quite so much....A road I travel well and am preparing to travel again soon...beautiful and comforting to give words to the feeling.

*AWHs*


 Whatever strength I add to myself becomes my greatest weakness, while whatever weakness I'll consciously endure will be replaced with a strength that is not my own.
G. Finley

Tess
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5 posted 03-22-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

I think you've put difficult feelings and thoughts about a special friend into words in a wonderful way

great poem  



 "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle
tulip
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6 posted 03-22-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

BW,
I wouldn't let it slip away, it's not often you find it!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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This is what true friendship is all about.  
Broken Wings
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8 posted 03-22-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

Dark Angel~ Thank You, im glad you could relate, it's not often we have these feelings for a friend.

Danny~ Thank You, i feel very  privileged to have someone so special.

Romantic~ Thank You, i wonder if soulmates are as hard to find as soulfriends?...and i am the one who is lucky  

Butterfly~ you saw rite thru the poem. i wish you strength as you prepare to travel down tha familiar road. **AWHs** to you too my friend.Thank You

Tess~ Thank You, it took me a while to find the words, but i cleared my mind of all the confusion , and that was what i was left with

Tulip~ i would hold on forever if that were posible, but iv'e learned that nothing lasts forever.

hoot_owl~ i always heard people talk about friendships like these, but i never thought that i would be allowed to experience it.  


I WISH TO THANK YOU ALL FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ MY POEM.

TAKE CARE,
Broken Wings  


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


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