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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 03-22-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

I understand the way you are
Friends are near or are far
To them you lend your ear
And your heart which you hold dear
There was a time I wasn't sure
That these bonds were pure

But now that time is past
My trust in you I put at last
Why the sudden change of heart
Maybe it was there from the start
Yes I had to be certain
Nothing was hidden behind the curtain

You gave me a reason to doubt
Those words had no clout
Hidden things behind my back
Show the confidence that you lack
In my ability to accept things
Your mistrust loudly rings

I try to show that I can change
Put myself within your range
Questions, questions, tests, tests
Will your fears ever be put to rest
Look and see what's in my heart
Our love a work of art


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Broken Wings
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1 posted 03-22-2000 03:58 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

Beautiful as always!
keep them coming  


take care **hug**
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


2 posted 03-22-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I understand everything your going through..been there and done that....give me an e-mail sometime we will chat about it!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 03-22-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Broken Heart...thank you.  They just kind of pour out.  Glad you like them!!!  Take care, my friend.  

Romantic Heart...still there and doing that.  Thank you for the offer, you will be hearing from me.  I'd love to hear your take on things.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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