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Talaira
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FIRST CHILD

When I looked into her eyes I fell hopelessly in love
Springtime was now forever flowing through my heart
How is that that when she cries my soul wrenches in pain
And when she smiles I'm lit alight in heaven's joy
Gazing upon her I drift into joyous dreams
A lifetime of memories I will inscribe upon my soul
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Ahhh, the love for your child, there is nothing sweeter.  May all of your memories be as sweet as this poem.
Lone Wolf
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Talaira....Hang on to those precious memories.  The bond you are building today will meet the challenges of tomorrow.  Sweet poem!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Danny Holloway
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Beautiful expression.  You now know the meaning of life.  Such a simple secret don't you think.
Talaira
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Thank you for your feed back.  It's very encouraging.  
 
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