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vandana
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0 posted 03-22-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

Tell me,
Tell If you really care,
Tell me,
What do you see in my eyes?
Do you see love in my eyes?
Tell me,
If you really care,
Telll me,
How much I love you,
Telll me,
If our love is meant to be,
Tell  me,
If you really love me,
Tell me,
what do you see in my eyes,
Tell me,
Because I know
our love is meant to be,
Our love is true,
If our love is really true,
Please tell me,
But I can tell it rom my heart,
Tell me
If It's really true
that you really love me,
Tell me,
If It's true,
that you love me,
Tell me,
If It's true,
But I love you
with all my heart,
Tell me If you really care ,
Tell me,
© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-22-2000 01:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

The eyes speak what is in the heart!  

Denise
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 03-22-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Vandana....Excellent poem!!!  I can totally relate to these feelings.  Hang in there.  He just may come around....don't be afriad to show your true feelings.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Broken Wings
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since 03-18-2000
Posts 156
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3 posted 03-22-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

Yes, the eyes are the windows to the soul.
stay strong, one day he will see.
Great Poem!

take care,
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
Posts 9405
Pennsylvania


4 posted 03-22-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

How is our lovely Indian poet?
Glad to see you continue to post
Lovely poem, dear
Liz
 
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