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vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-03-22 11:12 AM


Tell me,
Tell If you really care,
Tell me,
What do you see in my eyes?
Do you see love in my eyes?
Tell me,
If you really care,
Telll me,
How much I love you,
Telll me,
If our love is meant to be,
Tell  me,
If you really love me,
Tell me,
what do you see in my eyes,
Tell me,
Because I know
our love is meant to be,
Our love is true,
If our love is really true,
Please tell me,
But I can tell it rom my heart,
Tell me
If It's really true
that you really love me,
Tell me,
If It's true,
that you love me,
Tell me,
If It's true,
But I love you
with all my heart,
Tell me If you really care ,
Tell me,

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-22 01:49 PM


The eyes speak what is in the heart!  

Denise

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-03-22 03:40 PM


Vandana....Excellent poem!!!  I can totally relate to these feelings.  Hang in there.  He just may come around....don't be afriad to show your true feelings.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
3 posted 2000-03-22 03:44 PM


Yes, the eyes are the windows to the soul.
stay strong, one day he will see.
Great Poem!

take care,
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-03-22 06:45 PM


How is our lovely Indian poet?
Glad to see you continue to post
Lovely poem, dear
Liz

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