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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2000-03-22 07:48 AM

Sun rays
shadowed
  of clouds dark
and
tears fall
like rain, pounding
hard against my
heart

for I don't know
how to let
     you go

your starlit eyes….
  never gazed upon
mine
  flesh to flesh
   fingers entwined
with chance…
         only to
abandon

breath that
escapes the
melodic tune of
your voice
   at no time
fell upon
these ears

so

soul mates
   once found
become
dreamers forever
lost.

Dark Angel
2000

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-22-2000).]

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-03-22 08:59 AM

Beautifully sad!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-03-22 09:36 AM

DarkAngel~
This is absolutely powerfully presented.
A soul-searching piece.
Credible job, hon.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-03-22 10:24 AM

Wow, you keep getting better with each post

Exceptional work here

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-03-22 10:42 AM

Sadly beuatiful, Dark Angel.

Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 2000-03-22 11:26 AM

(walking away, slowly with head down) BOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO....sniff sniff sniff

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-03-22 04:04 PM

Exquisite.

Broken Wings
Member

since 2000-03-18

Posts 157
Miami, FL.

7 posted 2000-03-22 04:23 PM

EXCELLENT!!

take care,
Broken Wings

"As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2000-03-22 04:29 PM

Dark Angel this is as beautiful as your poem Amore Mio but alas very sad but full of emotion and feelings. Hoping for love to come your way...and stay. James

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

9 posted 2000-03-22 11:51 PM

You already know that I'm here for you whenever you need someone, so all I will say is beautifully sad poem and
*wrapping my lil arms around ya:
(((((((Hugebigwarmhuggs)))))))

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

10 posted 2000-03-23 12:02 PM

Hold your heart well m'friend...with hooes of happiness coming your way...(((HUGS))))

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

11 posted 2000-03-23 01:56 AM

Soulmate, my friend, is a fickle misunderstood word...as you and I have both had cause to find out in our lives...this is wonderfully done - and here again you can have a hug!

Love ya

K

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

12 posted 2000-03-23 01:58 AM

This is very sad. I hope you find what you've lost . I really hope you haven't experienced what you've written but I suspect that to be so eloquent one must have lived it. Thanks,
David2

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