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I Grieve

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-22-2000 07:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel



Sun rays
shadowed
  of clouds dark
and
tears fall
like rain, pounding
hard against my
heart
  
for I don't know
how to let
     you go

your starlit eyes….
  never gazed upon
mine
  flesh to flesh
   fingers entwined
with chance…
         only to
abandon

breath that
escapes the
melodic tune of
your voice
   at no time
fell upon
these ears

so

soul mates
   once found
become
dreamers forever      
lost.

Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge






[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-22-2000).]
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 03-22-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautifully sad!  
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2 posted 03-22-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
This is absolutely powerfully presented.
A soul-searching piece.
Credible job, hon.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 03-22-2000 10:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow, you keep getting better with each post   Exceptional work here  
Denise
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4 posted 03-22-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sadly beuatiful, Dark Angel.

Denise
WhtDove
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5 posted 03-22-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

(walking away, slowly with head down) BOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO....sniff sniff sniff
serenity blaze
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6 posted 03-22-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Exquisite.  

Broken Wings
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7 posted 03-22-2000 04:23 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

EXCELLENT!!

take care,
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


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8 posted 03-22-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Dark Angel this is as beautiful as your poem Amore Mio but alas very sad but full of emotion and feelings.  Hoping for love to come your way...and stay.   James
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You already know that I'm here for you whenever you need someone, so all I will say is beautifully sad poem and
*wrapping my lil arms around ya:
(((((((Hugebigwarmhuggs)))))))
devina
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10 posted 03-23-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Hold your heart well m'friend...with hooes of happiness coming your way...(((HUGS))))
Severn
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11 posted 03-23-2000 01:56 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Soulmate, my friend, is a fickle misunderstood word...as you and I have both had cause to find out in our lives...this is wonderfully done - and here again you can have a hug!

Love ya

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
David2
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12 posted 03-23-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

This is very sad. I hope you find what you've lost . I really hope you haven't experienced what you've written but I suspect that to be so eloquent one must have lived it. Thanks,
     David2
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