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Teardrop Of a Rose
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Teardrop Of a Rose |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Thy embrace is warm with thy love, As thy hand deep inside a glove, Thy voice, my love, so sweet,sweet to thine ear, For even the voice of an angel cannot compare, How shall I love thee? To feel thy arms as petals of a rose, So soft wrapped around me, As to the poetry you compose, Thy words fly to thy heart, As a dove flies to the heavens in the sky, My love, hold me, look deep into mine eyes, What do you feel? What longings do stir within thy own heart? A love of this sweet rose, Forever entwined to never depart, Kiss these silken lips of red, Longing to be kissed, come into thy loving arms, Feel my love of wonderous bliss, For beauty I find, Deep within thy soul, Of poetry and rhyme, Fantasies beyond thy control, My dear, My sweet, Take me away, Far away from here, Into thy Heart, thy dreams, Another time, another year, I belong to thee, I ask for thy help to set me free, Unlock loves hidden chamber inside this maidens heart, for only you have thy key to open the deepest part, Unto forever I will pledge this vow, To wait for you my love, my soul, Someway, somehow, The silken petals of this rose will not wilt away, She remains forever inside a glass, She will await, Day after day... For thy love to surpass, To melt Thy heart with thy words so devine, Words etched forever inside my mind, So I ask My love, of thee, Take me upon this voyage across the savage seas, Rescue me my love, have not a fear, and until that time arrives, I will be waiting for thee to appear, The petals of this rose will drop, Only one solitary tear. For you my love...let it be sweet music to thy ears! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thy poem is perfection of thy heart (smile) this is SO beautiful...how could he resist. perfect poem... take care, jm ps...this has nothing to do with the poem... but you have amazing hair..LOL  and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful romantic love poem! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
One big SIGH! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Romantic Heart, If you, with words, this heart might win, I throw open it's doors to let you in. If perchance the tears should come, I pray thee, Shed one tear for me. INclan |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Janet Marie: LOL! thanks for the hair comment, I use Herbal essence! haha!you know the commerical! I gues it inspires my romantic side! hehe! Thanks for thinking it was beautiful, your a mighty fine poet yourself! Denise: Your welcome to say the least! I am honored by your remarks! Whitedove: thanks for the sigh, glad to make you feel in the romantic mood, I try to be a positive poet! inclan...Throw open thy doors unto thy heart, Let thy words flow inside, Many a tear will fall for you, without thy being by my side, Thy prayer has been answered, This very hour, this very day, What in reply do thou have to say?< !signature--> "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-22-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Romantic Heart....such loving words. Big sigh....I am sure he will adore them!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
BEAUTIFUL POEM! I'M SPEECHLESS. take care, Broken Wings P.S. Thanks for the shampoo tip....hehee "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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seti@home Junior Member
since 1999-11-28
Posts 24 |
love it!!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL "EXCUSE ME MISS...BUT COULD YOU GET ME SOME OF THAT SHAMPOO" HEY I SAY--WHATEVER WORKS LOL     |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Romantic! Lovely poem to read on a quiet day...I liked it..  |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
I found your poem to be quite moving, I am sure whomever it is intended for will be moved as well. David2 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A romantic heart you have indeed, to write of love so beautifully Well written Liz |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lone...whoever he is? I hope he does?Glad you liked Thank you sweetie!!!Broken wings: Your name reminds me of Mister Misters song...Thanks for you sweet reply! Seti: thanks! Janet:..lol! you go girl! "Oh, YES"...hehe! Poet: I am happy and honored from your reply! You Truely are a devine poetess! David: Glad to have touched you so deeply, that was my goal!!! Liz: Your poems move me as well I am happy to receive such comments from such a great poetess! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Romantic Heart, My response thee have this day, this very hour for I dare not disappoint a kindred spirit, such as thee. solitary tear in falling dost thou hear me wailing Autumn wind by carrying Siren's song I grieve thy passing moment What in reply do thou have to say? |
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