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This Dream

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Michael
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0 posted 03-22-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

THIS DREAM


I sit and cry a silent tear,
Longing for you to hold me near.
I wish I could just fly to you,
To somehow make this dream come true.
Your voice whispers soft in my ears,
As all the world disappears.
I dance with you ‘neath the night sky,
You wipe the tear from my eye.

I wish that I could find a way,
To pull you near if just to say...
These words that linger on my lips,
Feel passion with these fingertips,
By a glazed stare upon my eye,
Within your kiss, one breathless sigh,
In my grasp what I hold now true...
The dream in heart I share with you.


Michael


[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-22-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-22-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

sigh...lovely poem and great optimism
devina
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2 posted 03-22-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I'll be near enough to touch before you know it....patience my dearest...

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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feels like eavesdropping...intimate and sweet.
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4 posted 03-22-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Michael you have turned out to be a romantic lately...must be the muse you have for inspiration! Lovely words! lucky lady!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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5 posted 03-22-2000 04:59 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You really revealed your romantic part in this one...I love the lines.."These words that linger on my lips,  Feel passion with these fingertips."   James
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6 posted 03-22-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Michael~
Love comes in to warm the heart.
So nice to see your 'fire'.
~*Marge~



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7 posted 03-22-2000 08:17 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful and romantic, well done Michael!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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8 posted 03-22-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Michael, there seem to be many facets to you.
A complex man, yes?

This is especially soft and sensuous.

Corinne
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Romance is a wonderful thing  
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Beautiful poem, Michael!

Denise
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Beautiful!
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Michael....beautifully written.  Hope you get your chance.  Never lose sight of the dreeam.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Michael
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13 posted 03-22-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

hey walt, good to hear from you bud - it's been awhile.  Me thinks "we" should collaborate on a poem of our own since you've been venturing into that realm lately.  LMK what you think.

devina - **twiddling thumbs**  

serenity - you're welcome to listen in anytime.

A Romantic Heart, the right muse makes all the differance in the world me thinks.  

james, yeah that part of me is there - just been dormant for awhile.

Marge, Indeed, it feels good to shake off some of that frost....

Corinne, complex would be a mild understatement me thinks...

Lone Wolf, that I never will.

Thank you all for the kind replies.


Michael

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words so soft and tender........a beautiful poem   creating lovely images....and inspired no doubt by an equally wonderful person...
thanks for sharing it

I loved reading it

Tess
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15 posted 03-29-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Michael, Another romantic deep feeling poem, something must be in the water. I've missed much not reading all the poems. This one is a gem.

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Wow..one word..beautiful

 
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Michael, what a magnificent gift of expression you have - and what a loving heart.  You have a lucky lady, there!

Troy


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18 posted 03-29-2000 03:08 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Longings expressed beautifully! *S*
 
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