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Poet deVine
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0 posted 03-22-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine

Iíve held my piece long enough
No pun intended here
Someone has caught my fancy
Itís one of you, I fear.

No words have I yet spoken
Pledging to you my heart
No verses yet are written
I knew not where to start

But as the time of spring
Draws longer into the day
My passion for you grows
And I just have to say

Deep within my heart
Your tender smiles reside
And now that I am bolder
No longer can I hide

I ask not for your love
In reply to my little rhyme
But if you could, please,
Take a bit of time

Think hard upon my plight
Give pause at end of day
ďI love you tooĒ is all
I wish to hear you say

Only one reply I seek
But I know it will not be
For of this love you are immune
And cannot, sir, love me.

© Copyright 2000 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-22-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

can't reply hmm well oops...whoever tiz is very lucky yuh...well written poet good luck to you
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2 posted 03-22-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Sorry Sharon...couln't help but reply to such a beautiful poem...good luck girl!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
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3 posted 03-22-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Gotta reply anyway. I hope you get the response you desire with such a fine poem as this. And if it makes any difference...I love ya too  
Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 03-22-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Alright so shoot me, but I had to bump it back up  
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
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5 posted 03-22-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I'm not replying, i'm hopeing, that this person will get the message and respond to this lady's fancy.
Back up you go................
ps, nice poem.
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6 posted 03-22-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, it's easy to see you aren't talking about me because, after so many months of seeing your heart, feelings and beautiful emotions permeate your poetry, I find it easy to say I love you. Who's da bum that wouldn't?
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7 posted 03-22-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You better tell him, else how's he to tell you?  Hope it works out just the way you want it, too.

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 03-22-2000).]
Broken Wings
since 03-18-2000
Posts 156
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8 posted 03-22-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

Oh My Gawd, how BEAUTIFUL!


take care,
Broken Wings

 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."

Local Rebel
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9 posted 03-22-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Unrequited Love...such Muse...

A wonderful treatise of desire goddess!!
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10 posted 03-22-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well I can certainly relate to your situation PdV.  Sometimes you want to hear absolutely nothing but those 3 little words... for nothing else matters.  I hope they find there way to you.

Dark Angel
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11 posted 03-22-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sharon this is beautiful, hope this poem gives you the response you need. Good Luck!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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state of confusion

12 posted 03-22-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

I love your approach, Poet de Vine!  And if he had any inkling, he'll definitely know now!

Best of luck to you both, too!

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13 posted 03-22-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

Just in case he doesnít show and to prove once and for all that I canít write.......

I could climb the highest mountainside
Stand on the shore and turn the tide
Leap clear twelve feet up off the floor
I could keep the world from warring
Stop Brazilian soccer strikers scoring
I could do it and it wouldnít be a chore
But Iím sorry I canít love you any more

I could easily swim the widest sea
Set all the oppressed nations free
See all that mankind is and has in store
I could brave the very fires of hell
Fight rabid bears and live to tell
Give you almost anything you ask me for
But Iím sorry I canít love you any more

I could bring you wine or serenade
You with the silly rhymes Iíve made
From evenings fall until the morning dew
I could snatch the moon out of the sky
Grow angels wings and learn to fly
Do all these things because you asked me to
But I can't love you more than I already do

 Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

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14 posted 03-22-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

I like it  

Very whimsical...light...and full of humour..yet just that touch of longing..

Good luck!!

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15 posted 03-22-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for ken   Email ken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ken's Home Page   View IP for ken

Love will fing a way.
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16 posted 03-22-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

If this man can't love you, PdV, I know there's someone out there who can.. Your heart is so kind and giving, it's got to be there for you..
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In the space between moments

17 posted 03-22-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Love is out there, Ms. deVine.  And if it's destined, he will love you.  And if it isn't, someone else surely will. You are a wonderful person and who couldn't love you?  Beautiful work, deserves another bump up.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~

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18 posted 03-22-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

       how could we not reply?  This one has to stay on the first page so that the love of Sharon's life can see it and reply. . . and if you're reading this, you lucky man. . . don't keep this poor woman in suspense. . . reply!  Okay, you don't have to reply here, you can send her an e-mail, but do it soon!!!

Oh, and Sharon, this was a beautiful poem. . . I hope that he does reply, becasue how could any man not love someone as wonderful as you?


 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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19 posted 03-23-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Good luck!
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20 posted 03-23-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Well , I never could follow directions either ,
so I just gotta say , best of luck to you and your intended paramour ( but he probably doesn't deserve it )
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21 posted 03-23-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for nightloy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nightloy

Ain't it the truth. It hurts to know how much you like someone and them not liking you. Everyone goes through it but why must we put ourselves through hell.

anyway,  love the poem (had to reply)

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22 posted 03-24-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Chandni   Email Chandni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chandni

Best of luck Miss DeV

Rex Allen McCoy
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23 posted 03-24-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

This is so sad ...
I wish you luck in finding
true happiness

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Posts 476

24 posted 03-24-2000 11:24 AM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Well Strangle me*S*

Lovely poem....time will reveal all patient...
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