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devina
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0 posted 03-22-2000 12:57 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

Warm my soul with sweet delight-
Fill my heart with love and light-
*As I wish upon this star tonight*

Answer my prayers of happiness-
Feel the love that’s cast upon us-
Clear your mind of all but *trust*

Grant me your gently shaken hand-
Follow me sweetly in God’s plan-
Once fallen, now we both stand…

Care not of what they might think-
Feel the flow of undefined strength-
You’ll have your fill, take a drink…

With loving arms enveloping your soul-
I’ll fill your voids, I’ll make you whole-
Within the future that we now hold…




 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-22-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

*SIGH*

this is SO beautiful devina...so tender and loving and full of hope...such devotion...
LUCKY LUCKY GUY...
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


Michael
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3 posted 03-22-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

devina, Your warmth and healing heart flows beautifully in this.  When it come down to it, with out trust, there is nothing anyway.  The future looks bright, indeed.


michael
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4 posted 03-22-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is lovely 'sis'...sweet and direct, like you!  hope you gotchya e mail...
Love to you.
Daniella
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5 posted 03-22-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for Daniella   Email Daniella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniella

Devina,
Very lovely poetry..My favorite part was
"Follow me sweetly in Gods plan" Daniella
JamesMichael
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6 posted 03-22-2000 04:50 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely devina...I like the title...a great choice...and I like the first two lines..."warm my soul with sweet delight..fill my heart with love and light" you really started the poem off nice and rich.   James
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 03-22-2000 07:40 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
The trail that is marked with
bread crumbs of trust is an easy
trail to follow.

'Answer my prayers of happiness-
Feel the love that’s cast upon us-
Clear your mind of all but *trust*'

The karma is alive !
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Enola
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8 posted 03-22-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

Whoever this is for is very lucky.  And so are you, to have such a talent.  This is fantastic.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Enola
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9 posted 03-22-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

Whoever this is for is very lucky, and so are you.  This is fantastic.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Dark Angel
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10 posted 03-22-2000 08:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful writing devina, love it.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 03-22-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Simply devine  
Denise
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12 posted 03-22-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Devina!  

Denise
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 03-22-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Your poetry is so warm and beautiful...Heck, I think I'm falling in love with you girl!  Reading your mushy stuff, gives me the warm fuzzies too!  LOL  You have certainly come a long way in your writing and expressing yourself.  This is very beautiful and sincere....Bravissimo!

Sven
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14 posted 03-22-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Devina. . .I am always amazed by the depth of emotion in your writing. . . this is no exception. . . simply beautiful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marina
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15 posted 03-23-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

devina I'm glad to see your poetry become more uplifting again! You stay strong girl, plenty of fish in the sea! ( Although I think I'd keep this one.)

Marina
devina
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16 posted 03-23-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

JM-Lucky guy??? lucky me I'd say...

Michael-glad you know I'm here for you...I would do anything for you, ya know?

serenity- hugs and love back atcha sis!!!

Daniella- thank you and welcome to passions!!!

James- glad to hear it...and thank you!!

Marge- as you say...karma is good, no? love you hun!!

Enola- thank you for the compliment...tis only my heart speaking...

DA, Ruth, & Denise- your words of praise are just as lovely...thank you...

Femme- don't fall too hard, I'm already taken...

Sven- you always read me so well...thank you m'friend...

Marina- I don't think I could let him go...nor would I want to...thanks hun...



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



[This message has been edited by devina (edited 03-23-2000).]
David2
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17 posted 03-23-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Devina,
   Your poem is very touching, I look forward to reading more of your work.
        David2
neitham
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18 posted 03-23-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

"With loving arms enveloping your soul-
I’ll fill your voids, I’ll make you whole-
Within the future that we now hold…"

devina...i do wish someone whispers this words in my ear...M is indeed fortunate to have found you. Love it very much.
Best regards,
neitham



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