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late night cravings

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just_another_fe
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I got a craving
that wont go away
i ate all day
but the craving stays
what could it be
that i want to eat
pickles n' cheese
or a nice peice of meat
mint chocolate chip
cookies galore
my stomach is full
do i dare eat more
my stomach still wants
something from me
so i sit and ask myself
what could this craving i have tonight be??
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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-22-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Maybe its your heart that craves and not your stomach.
Interesting piece.....what did you eat to satisfy that craving???????
David2
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2 posted 03-22-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

What a cute poem! I agree with Danny though, it sure sounds as though it is your heart that is craving.
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