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A Rainbow's Heart

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Nan
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A rainbow's heart is surety
Embraced by every hue.
Chromatic rills of purity,
The path of course is true.

A solar smile on tempests shade
Casts vivid mantling hold.
Impaling mere dispersions bade
A rainbow's heart is gold.








[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-22-2000).]
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Wow!  How beautiful!
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2 posted 03-21-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Nan, this is absolutely beautiful! Very very beautiful!

Denise
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3 posted 03-21-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nan~
Oooh's and Aaah's galore.
Simply stunning.
~*Marge*~




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You do have a way with words.....and colors, m'dear....and the subject of the poem is well-deserving  
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Nan, this is splendid! I just love Rainbows, Cindy rainbows too     I need something to brighten my day. Thanks!
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Thank you, my friends... Rainbows are such wonderful phenomena, aren't they?
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Nan~
And ever-changing ...
I loved it again !
~*Marge*~



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Nan, with you I agree
A Rainbow's heart , fills me with glee
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Nan... the poem is lovely, the colors are beautiful... and methinks the author has a heart as golden as the subject. *S*
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Nan,
Your words are the phenomena
Your poetry is the gold
This is beautiful
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What a wonderful presentation both for the mind and the eyes  
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This has to be a reflection of your heart..

HUSG
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wonderfully beautiful!  
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Rainbows are Special...  
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I just saw PdV's message...Nan...well, you know what I think, you must do..

Huge HUSG

ooops...hope I got that right.*smacks hand over mouth*
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Beautifully done, Nan.  There is gold at the end of the rainbow me thinks.


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That is truly a glittering rainbow poem

WOW  

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I guess I just had RAINBOWS on my mind yesterday, ya know??
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geez.... give her HTML and here's what you get....

Heartfilled
Tones of color
Meandering through
Lines of poetic truth

Handfuls of
Treasures found in
Magnificent
Luminescence

Hey,
This is
Mighty
Lovely my

Honorable
Teacher.
Mighty
Lovely indeed.

(how the heck did you DO it?)
Nan
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Hey Doreen - You got here Justin Thyme....

If you click the edit button on the poem, you'll see how I did it... It's a scary sight!!
Thanks for the motley input, my friend..  

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-23-2000).]
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I loved this, but the yellow hurt my eyes! Just kidding, it was beautiful to look at and lovely to read.
        Thanks, David2  
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wow! doing the colours must have taken some work.. I love this poem
rainbows are beautiful
Yes, that is true
But not nearly as beautiful
as everyone of you!
***for everyone at Passions in poetry!***
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Hey Dave.. I agree with you about the yellow - hehe - How do you make a rainbow without it though?... I have lots more sonnets for ya - but you'll have to visit my site - or do a search here - I don't want to bore these nice people by posting them again... Thanks for reading...  

Mel - Flattery will get you everywhere - You can certainly stay around for awhile..  





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-24-2000).]
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WOW!
Awesome poem
Awesome 'special effects'
*hug*
~X~
 
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