»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #6
»
A Rainbow's Heart
| Open Poetry #6 |
|
A Rainbow's Heart |
|
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
|
A rainbow's heart is surety Embraced by every hue. Chromatic rills of purity, The path of course is true. A solar smile on tempests shade Casts vivid mantling hold. Impaling mere dispersions bade A rainbow's heart is gold.  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-22-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Nancy Ness - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! How beautiful! |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Nan, this is absolutely beautiful! Very very beautiful! Denise |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Oooh's and Aaah's galore. Simply stunning. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You do have a way with words.....and colors, m'dear....and the subject of the poem is well-deserving  |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Nan, this is splendid! I just love Rainbows, Cindy rainbows too I need something to brighten my day. Thanks! |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, my friends... Rainbows are such wonderful phenomena, aren't they? |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ And ever-changing ... I loved it again ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Nan, with you I agree A Rainbow's heart , fills me with glee |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Nan... the poem is lovely, the colors are beautiful... and methinks the author has a heart as golden as the subject. *S* |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nan, Your words are the phenomena Your poetry is the gold This is beautiful Liz |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful presentation both for the mind and the eyes |
||
|
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
This has to be a reflection of your heart.. HUSG |
||
|
Talaira Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 10Colorado |
wonderfully beautiful! |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Rainbows are Special...  |
||
|
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I just saw PdV's message...Nan...well, you know what I think, you must do.. Huge HUSG ooops...hope I got that right.*smacks hand over mouth* |
||
|
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully done, Nan. There is gold at the end of the rainbow me thinks. michael |
||
|
Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
That is truly a glittering rainbow poem WOW Tess |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I guess I just had RAINBOWS on my mind yesterday, ya know?? |
||
|
doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
geez.... give her HTML and here's what you get.... Heartfilled Tones of color Meandering through Lines of poetic truth Handfuls of Treasures found in Magnificent Luminescence Hey, This is Mighty Lovely my Honorable Teacher. Mighty Lovely indeed. (how the heck did you DO it?) |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Doreen - You got here Justin Thyme.... If you click the edit button on the poem, you'll see how I did it... It's a scary sight!! Thanks for the motley input, my friend..  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-23-2000).] |
||
|
David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
I loved this, but the yellow hurt my eyes! Just kidding, it was beautiful to look at and lovely to read. Thanks, David2 |
||
|
Mel~ Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 16Gosford, New South Wales, Australia |
wow! doing the colours must have taken some work.. I love this poem rainbows are beautiful Yes, that is true But not nearly as beautiful as everyone of you! ***for everyone at Passions in poetry!*** |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Dave.. I agree with you about the yellow - hehe - How do you make a rainbow without it though?... I have lots more sonnets for ya - but you'll have to visit my site - or do a search here - I don't want to bore these nice people by posting them again... Thanks for reading... Mel - Flattery will get you everywhere - You can certainly stay around for awhile.. [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-24-2000).] |
||
|
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
WOW! Awesome poem Awesome 'special effects' *hug* ~X~ |
||
|
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love this Nan. I love this ! |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Oohing and Ahhing right along with everyone else, Nan. Beauty~full in both colour and content! ~ Claire |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, The rainbow you have spun here is the prettiest I've seen in quite a while. *L* Sy |
||
|
Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Yep those Rainbows are special.... |
||
|
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Your going to have us all out chasing rainbows What a beautiful surprise to find today Well done Rex}<{{{{o> |
||
|
christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
creative, and beautiful. The meaning hasn't escaped me either. So true. Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
||
|
TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Truly lovely expression. This really made my day, when I needed a little pick me up, it found it's way to me! |
||
|
Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice blending of color and words. Now I know that there is a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
