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Never-Ending Circles Of You
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Never-Ending Circles Of You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Never-Ending Circles Of You ~*Marge Tindal*~ Never-ending circles of you surround me, holding me tenderly close to you. Emitting sighs that speak of pleasure spent, I go crazy with remembering Holding me tenderly close to you in arms so strong, yet tender. The more you seek of me the more I surrender. Emitting sighs that speak of pleasure spent, I gaze into the merriment of your eyes. Lost every time within the rapture of you, I meet you sigh for sigh. I go crazy with remembering, lost in these moments of reverie. Reaching to where you end and I begin, never-ending circles of you surround me. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow Marge, you are hot tonight...what a beautiful circle you make with love. |
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Nativetexan2 Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 13 |
Marge, what a lovely circle of emotions you weave. I started thinking about my own true love and the times we spend together. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Ah, the circles take us into the love. Thank you, my friend. Hey there, Texas~ ! Welcome to Passion's. I'm pleased that you found it enjoyable and that it stirred you to think of a loved one. I believe you will find many poets here to enjoy. Glad to have you with us.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I love your circles of love, Marge. Too bad I'm such a square!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Balladeer~ Surely those are self-imposed boundries ! Get thee to a carpenter ! I find you smack-dab in the middle of the circle of love and friendship. Love you ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
those never ending circles are quite gratifying!!  This was just the thing I needed to hear Ms. Margie!!!Love you, Devina Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Rose Petal Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52WVa. USA |
Cirles never end! Awesome poem!So many talented poets here! Rose |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Stop that Mom, you're embarassing me! Geez... Truly beautiful, once again Marge. love to you. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is what they mean when they say circle of love, my god this was fantastic Marge. Sweet Marge you never cease to amaze me Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ The circle takes you in ... not content for you to stand on the perimeter ... love is all. Rose~ So very glad you enjoyed it. Welcome to the circle of friendship here at Passion's. Serenity~ Little imp, I say ! Tracie~  You are so sweet. Yes, that's what the circles are all about ... forever rounding in dances of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sighing* Marge, this is beautiful |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ahh... Your words on this forum are like brush strokes on an artists' canvas... oh so beautiful~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thank you for the deep *sigh* Makes me feel that way too. Denise~ I thank you, lady. Mariee~ Oh, do you know how much I appreciate those words? Very, very much. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Never-ending circles of you surround me, holding me tenderly close to you. Emitting sighs that speak of pleasure spent, I go crazy with remembering -------------------- The more you seek of me the more I surrender. -------------- well, it seems spring fever has swept our sweet margie...... you smolder in you surrender my dear..this was gorgeous to read... why I do believe I'm flushed.... VERY nice work...red hot!!(smile)take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Janet Marie~ Pleased you enjoyed. A tiny piece of the feelings that encircles those in love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I found it, you did not tell me the title so I had to search, but alas I find the poem you described. Your message was so awesome that the structure was not needed. I saw it it though and thought you actually formed yours beautiful with the words it was marvelous. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lost Dreamer~ You little stinker ! I purposely didn't tell you the title ... and true friend that you are ... you cared enough to search for it. Now ... how does it feel for you to know that YOU were the reason it came about in this form? YOU were the form inspiration. I've so admired yours and I recall the first one I ever read of yours. Awesome ... and your reply was that I should try one sometime. Inspiration, girlfriend. I am so glad that you're here ! Now I can prance around in these little 'Pantalets' like you do ! Love to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, Wonderful!!!! Looks like you have a romantic streak in there. Bravo!!! i loved this one....sigh. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneHeart~ Oh, indeed this heart beats romanticism. So pleased to see that you like it. Have a great evening, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh my ... 'S' .... you know I love this one Marge ...  Beautiful |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Lovely to know your pen has no boundaries Marge. A script of endless beauty! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper~ You know I'm glad that you like it. It's always nice to see your smiling face. Shelley~ Thank you, my dear. I don't know about that 'no boundries' thing, but I sure love tip-toeing to the edge of inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, this is very beautiful.... Reaching to where you end and I begin, never-ending circles of you surround me. the last two lines just sum it up for me. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ You, my friend, are a sweetheart. Thank you, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes... Let's take these wonderful never-ending circles around again.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thank you. And the circle ... circles ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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