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Never-Ending Circles Of You

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Marge Tindal
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Never-Ending Circles Of You
~*Marge Tindal*~

Never-ending circles of you surround me,
holding me tenderly close to you.
Emitting sighs that speak of pleasure spent,
I go crazy with remembering

Holding me tenderly close to you
in arms so strong, yet tender.
The more you seek of me
the more I surrender.

Emitting sighs that speak of pleasure spent,
I gaze into the merriment of your eyes.
Lost every time within the rapture of you,
I meet you sigh for sigh.

I go crazy with remembering,
lost in these moments of reverie.
Reaching to where you end and I begin,
never-ending circles of you surround me.




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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Wow Marge, you are hot tonight...what a beautiful circle you make with love.
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Marge, what a lovely circle of emotions you weave. I started thinking about my own true love and the times we spend together.  
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3 posted 03-21-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Martie~
Ah, the circles take us into the love.
Thank you, my friend.

Hey there, Texas~ !
Welcome to Passion's.
I'm pleased that you found it enjoyable
and that it stirred you to think of
a loved one.
I believe you will find many poets here
to enjoy.
Glad to have you with us.  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 03-21-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I love your circles of love, Marge. Too bad I'm such a square!!!  
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Oh, Balladeer~
Surely those are self-imposed boundries !
Get thee to a carpenter !

I find you smack-dab in the middle of
the circle of love and friendship.
Love you ~*Me*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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devina
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those never ending circles are quite gratifying!! This was just the thing I needed to hear Ms. Margie!!!
Love you,
Devina

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Rose Petal
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Cirles never end! Awesome poem!So many talented poets here!

Rose
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Stop that Mom, you're embarassing me!
Geez...

Truly beautiful, once again Marge.  love to you.  
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This is what they mean when they say circle of love, my god this was fantastic Marge.

Sweet Marge you never cease to amaze me


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
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Devina~
The circle takes you in ...
not content for you to stand on
the perimeter ... love is all.

Rose~
So very glad you enjoyed it.
Welcome to the circle of friendship
here at Passion's.

Serenity~
Little imp, I say !

Tracie~

You are so sweet.
Yes, that's what the circles
are all about ...
forever rounding in dances of love.
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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*sighing* Marge, this is beautiful  
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Very beautiful, Marge!

Denise
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Ahh...
Your words on this forum are like brush strokes on an artists' canvas... oh so beautiful~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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Hoot~
Thank you for the deep *sigh*
Makes me feel that way too.

Denise~
I thank you, lady.

Mariee~
Oh, do you know how much
I appreciate those words?  
Very, very much.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Never-ending circles of you surround me,
holding me tenderly close to you.
Emitting sighs that speak of pleasure spent,
I go crazy with remembering
--------------------
The more you seek of me
the more I surrender.
--------------
well, it seems spring fever has swept our sweet margie......
you smolder in you surrender my dear..this was gorgeous to read... why I do believe I'm flushed.... VERY nice work...red hot!!(smile)
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


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Janet Marie~
Pleased you enjoyed.
A tiny piece of the feelings
that encircles those in love.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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I found it, you did not tell me the title so I had to search, but alas I find the poem you described. Your message was so awesome that the structure was not needed. I saw it it though and thought you actually formed yours beautiful with the words it was marvelous.
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Lost Dreamer~
You little stinker !
I purposely didn't tell you the title ...
and true friend that you are ... you cared
enough to search for it.  

Now ... how does it feel for you to know
that YOU were the reason it came about in
this form?  YOU were the form inspiration.
I've so admired yours and I recall the first
one I ever read of yours.  Awesome ...
and your reply was that I should try one
sometime.  Inspiration, girlfriend.

I am so glad that you're here !
Now I can prance around in these
little 'Pantalets' like you do !
Love to you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,
Wonderful!!!!  Looks like you have a romantic streak in there.  Bravo!!!  i loved this one....sigh.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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LoneHeart~
Oh, indeed this heart beats romanticism.
So pleased to see that you like it.
Have a great evening, my friend.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Oh my ... 'S' .... you know I love this one Marge ...  
Beautiful
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Lovely to know your pen has no boundaries  Marge. A script of endless beauty!
Marge Tindal
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Pepper~
You know I'm glad that you like it.
It's always nice to see your smiling face.

Shelley~
Thank you, my dear.
I don't know about that 'no boundries' thing, but I sure love tip-toeing to the edge of inspiration.
~*Marge*~


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Marge, this is very beautiful....

Reaching to where you end and I begin,
never-ending circles of you surround me.

the last two lines just sum it up for me.

Parker

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