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Moonbeams (Haiku)

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INclan
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0 posted 03-21-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for INclan


soft moonbeams falling
follow fingers through my hair
playing love's cadence
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 03-21-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

INclan, this sounds and feels so pretty when read aloud.

~ Claire
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2 posted 03-21-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Inclan~
Yes !  Yes ! Yes !
PERFECT !
~*Marge*~


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Lone Wolf
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Inclan,
I can feel it....great haiku!!!!

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Denise
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4 posted 03-21-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful! Very lovely!

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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Now that is my kind of Haiku  
INclan
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6 posted 03-22-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

My most sincere thanx for your words of appreciation and encouragement...Meadowmuse, Marge, Lone Wolf, dsnyder, and Hoot_owl_rn.

INclan
pmc
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Hello INclan,

Your Hakiu sounds great.
If I knew the rules I would probably appreciate it more.
What are the rules?

Pat
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Without a doubt, the best one I've seen here.
INclan
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9 posted 03-22-2000 01:38 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Thank you PMC and Balladeer.

PMC, there is an email on its way to you with a brief discription of Haiku.

Balladeer, that is HIGH praise coming from you.  I fear that I have set the bar too high for myself in the future.

Best Regards,

INclan
Tenderheart
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INclan...this is special indeed...very vivid, most meaningful.  Thanks!
INclan
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11 posted 03-23-2000 09:59 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Tenderheart,

Thank you for your encouragement.  Welcome to Passions.....enjoy!

INclan
Tess
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This is truly beautiful

So much said with so few words.

Soft and tender and loving

and I'm feeling a little out of my depth here with all these wonderful poems being posted!!
BUT enjoying it all immensely  
I guess I can only hope some of the talent rubs off!!

Tess

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bodies."
-Aristotle

David2
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Beautiful imagery, I too would like to know the proper format for a Haiku. Would you mind sending them to me also? Thanks,
        David2
 
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