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INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2000-03-21 07:40 PM

soft moonbeams falling
follow fingers through my hair
playing love's cadence

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-03-21 07:44 PM

INclan, this sounds and feels so pretty when read aloud.

~ Claire

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-03-21 07:45 PM

Inclan~
Yes ! Yes ! Yes !
PERFECT !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-03-21 08:30 PM

Inclan,
I can feel it....great haiku!!!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-03-21 08:51 PM

Beautiful! Very lovely!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-03-22 10:51 AM

Now that is my kind of Haiku

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

6 posted 2000-03-22 11:22 AM

My most sincere thanx for your words of appreciation and encouragement...Meadowmuse, Marge, Lone Wolf, dsnyder, and Hoot_owl_rn.

INclan

pmc
Junior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 48
Germany

7 posted 2000-03-22 11:49 AM

Hello INclan,

Your Hakiu sounds great.
If I knew the rules I would probably appreciate it more.
What are the rules?

Pat

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2000-03-22 12:22 PM

Without a doubt, the best one I've seen here.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2000-03-22 01:38 PM

Thank you PMC and Balladeer.

PMC, there is an email on its way to you with a brief discription of Haiku.

Balladeer, that is HIGH praise coming from you. I fear that I have set the bar too high for myself in the future.

Best Regards,

INclan

Tenderheart
Junior Member

since 2000-03-20

Posts 17

10 posted 2000-03-22 09:09 PM

INclan...this is special indeed...very vivid, most meaningful. Thanks!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

11 posted 2000-03-23 09:59 AM

Tenderheart,

Thank you for your encouragement. Welcome to Passions.....enjoy!

INclan

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

12 posted 2000-03-23 10:03 AM

This is truly beautiful

So much said with so few words.

Soft and tender and loving

and I'm feeling a little out of my depth here with all these wonderful poems being posted!!
BUT enjoying it all immensely

I guess I can only hope some of the talent rubs off!!

Tess

"What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two
bodies."
-Aristotle

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

13 posted 2000-03-23 10:32 AM

Beautiful imagery, I too would like to know the proper format for a Haiku. Would you mind sending them to me also? Thanks,
David2

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