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She sleeps

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Seymour Tabin
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I think this is a repost?


            She Sleeps

She lies like dead upon the bed,
Alive the land of things unsaid.
Sleeping the ebb and flow salon
And the dawn has come and gone.

I fear her state of near yet far,
Her mind to long in Shangri-la.
Held to hard to the non aware,
I question time and is she there?

Alone she lay so sweet and still,
In rest her body needs to fill.
Yet still she shows no sign of wake
And do I dare the slightest shake?

Will she excuse the rude intrude?
Or will it cause vicissitude?
In tender love I vacillate?
I love her, no matter the state.

The question is my love to wake?
Perhaps the slighest little shake?
I think I'll wait a little more
And then just SLAM the bedroom DOOR.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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To wake
tis late
to stop the snore
slam the door..

Sy, this was so sweet and then that last line ...was quite a treat!
Elizabeth Santos
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Sy,
This one made me laugh.
Loved it
Liz
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Thank you for re~sharing, Sy. I loved the smile this brought.

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4 posted 03-21-2000 07:42 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~

When in sleep
I am mired
it's because
I'm really tired.

If you choose
to make hay
while sun is shining,
just go away !

Let me sleep
within the me
of peace and quiet
without thee.

Be forewarned,
for goodness sake ...
I'm a TIGER
in early wake !

*You amaze me with your words.
I didn't see this before and I'm glad
it tickled my fancy on this evening.
Thank you, my love.
~*Marge*~


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...hehehehehe.....Sy, you little devil! What a hillarious ending!  

Denise
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LOL  
Seymour Tabin
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Martie, So glad you enjoyed. *L*

Elizabeth, always happy to make you laugh. Love Sy

Meadow, You know two smiles are equal to one laugh. *L*

Marge, Happy sleeping and put bumpers on your doors. *L*

Denise, Thank you for sharing a laugh. *L*

Hoot, Thank you for the LOL. *L*
 
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