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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind

0 posted 2000-03-21 02:37 PM


On my window gently tapping
Is the sound of rain left rapping
To the beat of sorrows song
Through the day and all night long.

To the window I venture forth
Looking for a ray of warmth
For days on end we see this pour
Only rain and nothing more.

(Can anyone tell I'm homebound and sick of the rain??  ARRGGHH!)




 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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U K Hero
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1 posted 2000-03-21 02:41 PM


Excellent, lovely rhythm.
Denise
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2 posted 2000-03-21 02:58 PM


I know that feeling! This is a great poem, Marie! It sings like a song!

Denise

Marina
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3 posted 2000-03-21 07:03 PM


Marie but on the bright side, the rain brings the spring flowers!  Lovely poem.

Marina

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2000-03-21 08:40 PM


Marie,
Short and sweet.  I love it!!!  Hang in there, it has to end sometime!!!!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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5 posted 2000-03-21 08:47 PM


Mariee~

This is just oozing with the images
of your rainfall.

What I would give for some of your rain
here in Florida right now.
I'm ready for some puddle-jumping !

Enjoyed this so much.
~*Marge*~



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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
6 posted 2000-03-22 10:55 AM



According to the forecast, I'll need those shades tomorrow... finally!

U K Hreo, Denise, Marina, Lone Wolf and Marge: Thanks for your replies    
Glad you liked my little ditty~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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