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mariee66
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0 posted 03-21-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mariee66

On my window gently tapping
Is the sound of rain left rapping
To the beat of sorrows song
Through the day and all night long.

To the window I venture forth
Looking for a ray of warmth
For days on end we see this pour
Only rain and nothing more.

(Can anyone tell I'm homebound and sick of the rain??  ARRGGHH!)




 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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1 posted 03-21-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Excellent, lovely rhythm.
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2 posted 03-21-2000 02:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I know that feeling! This is a great poem, Marie! It sings like a song!

Denise
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3 posted 03-21-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Marie but on the bright side, the rain brings the spring flowers!  Lovely poem.

Marina
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Marie,
Short and sweet.  I love it!!!  Hang in there, it has to end sometime!!!!!!  

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Mariee~

This is just oozing with the images
of your rainfall.

What I would give for some of your rain
here in Florida right now.
I'm ready for some puddle-jumping !

Enjoyed this so much.
~*Marge*~



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According to the forecast, I'll need those shades tomorrow... finally!

U K Hreo, Denise, Marina, Lone Wolf and Marge: Thanks for your replies    
Glad you liked my little ditty~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

 
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