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I Fold You Tightly

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Lost Dreamer
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I Fold You Tightly

I fold you tightly into blankets creases
snuggle closely in to feel your warmth
absence of your virtual body ceases
my illusional imagination takes a hold

Snuggle closely in to feel your warmth
entangled angrily in the blankets war
silence of invisible breath raging forth
clenched fists grasping to win struggle

Absence of your virtual body ceases
memories candlelight slowly flickers
sleepy mind's mere identity releases
soothing silence meditative presence

My illusional imagination takes a hold
solemnly granting me peaceful sleep
dreaming cultivated meadows of gold
I fold you tightly into blankets creases

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This gave me a warm and cozy feeling! This gray cold rainy day would be just perfect to snuggle up with some of those meadows of gold! This is beautiful, Gloria!

Denise
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Your detail is amazing. Your words put me to ease. I loved it!

~Andrea
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Denise: Thank You so much, glad you enjoyed.

AndreaA02: I thank you very much, glad you loved it.
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Gloria, just this title brought a smile to my face and the poem even more so. Wonderful work my friend  
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Gloria I love how you did this! How you started so sweetly, then into a struggle and to end just as sweetly as you started! Wonderful A+
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Ruth: I Thank You very much

Rebecca: A warm Thank you to you also
 
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