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Afternoon Delight

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Marge Tindal
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    Days of blooming spring
           Boughs of weeping willow wave
Dancing with delight

~*Marge Tindal*~ 2000





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 03-21-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

aw     .... a perfect image of spring!    
-molly aka sam

 Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield




[This message has been edited by MyPenNameIsSam (edited 03-21-2000).]
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 03-21-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Giant smile
you plastered
on my face
with this one.
mariee66
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Ahhh... Ohhh... Ahhh...
So beautiful the picture you create~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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4 posted 03-21-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I love weeping willows! Very beautiful, Marge! I have a poem by the same title but it is about an afternoon with my granddaughter. Delights come in all packages, don't they?!!  

Denise
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and I was thinking about another kind of "afternoon delight"...anyone else?

nice Marge..I always love what you write
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Sam~

Always spring in bloom
Lover's hearts are opening
Love blooms everywhere
~*Marge*~

Lost Dreamer~

Softly sing of spring
Let joyous lovers be heard
Harmonies take flight
~*Marge*~


Marie~

Look ! Edge of forest
Bunnies hop in grasses green
Cotton tail delight
~*Marge*~


Denise~

Sweet willows of weep
Tears leave on soft breeze blowing
Float sorrow away
~*Marge*~


Lorelei~

You blow me away
Wanton spirit of delight
Creature of habit
~*Marge*~



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My mind was right there with Lorelei...

Day of wind in motion
leaves are dancing
sky of reverent blue
Marina
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8 posted 03-21-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Marge I think this is the shortiest poem I've seen you write. Long or short It is a delight as always.

Marina
devina
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This is light and feathery Marge...beautiful poem for such beautiful weather.

Enjoy the sun on your face hun...I know I am!!!

Love you,
~devina

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Corinne
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Aye, surely she's the queen of Haiku!!!

Loverly, Marge!
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Marge,

Pretty words, pretty visions...

~ Claire
Marge Tindal
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Martie~
Lovely reply, my friend.

Reverent blue sky
At peace with rains of summer
Clouds go drifting by
~*Marge*~

Marina~
Shorty Haiku's that I love doing.

Image appears soft
Your smile reflects happiness
Leaps to face of me

~*Marge*~

Devina~

Feathered light wing brings
Touch of smile from one in love
Thoughts of one afar

~*Marge*~

Corinne~

Barefoot nymph dances
In rain on Florida shore
Lithe, light and lovely

~*Marge*~

Claire~

Visions come to mind
Flashing lights of brilliance
Beauty soon follows
~*Marge*~


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Nice Haiku Marge...but then you know I like the style.

Yes, my mind first went somewhere else....

hehehe
Marge Tindal
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INclan~
Thanks.  It's a joy we share.

Red-breasted Robin
Hops about upon the lawn
Earthworm burrows deep
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nice Haiku, Marge.  Can't wait for spring!!!

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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Lone Wolf~
Thank you.  Me too !

Lone wolf howls at moon
Somewhere across the meadow
Answering echo
~*Marge*~




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Smiling here  
Marge Tindal
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Hoot~
Thanks for the smile.

Bough of pine in night
Echoes sound of hooting owl
What a wise old pine
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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