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First__Knight
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0 posted 03-21-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

No More Plans
~First  Knight~

Darkness calls so…..
Where does it end when the road travels on?
Resources found low while left with despair.
Needless time spent wishing.

Alone, worthless, abandon,
Empty of self and yet full of pain.
Events unfold without control,
Hidden feelings, untouched.

Self reliant, unjust demands
I’ve been here before
And I’ll be here again.
Telling one self  “I will be alright”,
I have to , because I am all there is.

I know I am alive because I feel the pain but,
If life is found to be that which happens while you make plans of the future……
What do you do when there are no more plans to make?



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-21-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David~, my friend~

Life throws us all a curve every now and again.  
It's how we travel the curves that
leads us to brighter plans waiting to be made.
There are ALWAYS plans to be made,
my friend ... ALWAYS !

Life deems it necessary to test our worth
by measuring who we are ... by what we do
for another.  If at the end of day ...
I have more left over than what I have
given away ... I have not given my most
to others.  I must plan on giving more tomorrow.  
To someone, somewhere whose need is greater than my own.

Sweetheart, use that 'self-reliancy' to be just that.  
Give of yourself to others.
Now .. how's that for a 'plan' of action ?  

Great big *HUGS* to you.
Find a plan that works for you and gives joy to someone else !
Love you ~*Marge*~





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RainbowGirl
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2 posted 03-21-2000 07:40 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sweetheart, you make plans to breath, and then when you can manage that one, you make plans to open your eyes and feelt he warmth of the sunshine (if you have any) then watch nature...works for me..

HUGS
Severn
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3 posted 03-21-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Yep - what Marge and RG said...

Wise wise words from both.



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
hoot_owl_rn
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David,
    This poem makes me quite sad. Our lives are what we make of them and we have two choices, either to make the best of what we have or to be miserable...I think I know you well enough to know you want the best. You have people that care a great deal about you, you only need to open your eyes and see that.
Hugs  
Ruth
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