I love those lines... "And there's no mistaking that look in your eyes, you'd rather be alone" and "I still remember when the truth became all too clear, you wouldn't even hold me as I started to break down and cry".
So descriptive... reminds me all too much of the last relationship I was in... sad, but you'll get through it! And welcome to Passions! We'll support ya and help ya out if you need anything! Thanks for sharing your poem!
-molly aka sam
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield