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Daniella
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0 posted 03-21-2000 03:40 AM       View Profile for Daniella   Email Daniella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniella




How Did You Know?
You see my tears
even though I don't let them
Fall,
You feel My hurt when I can't
find the strength to climb that
Wall,
You look inside
And take Me as I am, But yet
You encourage Me to grow for the
better with Time,
Until I hear the ringing of the
"come home Chime"
You stopped in your tracks
And took a look back
But most others kept walking
along,
Thank You for helping me to see
that I belong.
You hear my pain and confusion
when I don't even speak one word,
The caring touch You bring me,
Is like the joy of seeing a sweet soaring bird
This is why every day I have to
thank God for You,
Because without You what would I
do?
Written by: Daniella
© Copyright 2000 Daniella - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 03-21-2000 05:02 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Truly beautiful sentiments Daniella - everyone needs someone like this in their lives.

Welcome to Passions...

    

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


2 posted 03-21-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Daniella this is beautiful writiing..I really liked "And take me as I am, But yet you encourage me to grow for the better with time."   James
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 03-21-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Daniella~
Welcome to Passion's.

Friends always know.
Nice sentiments you've expressed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


4 posted 03-21-2000 05:34 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

you've expressed yourself well...we need more expression of raw emotion...WELCOME!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Nan
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It's very nice to have you here at Passions, Daniella... and with a poem that's full of wonderful sentiment.. Check your email for a special greeting..
Denise
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6 posted 03-21-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Daniella! This is absolutely beautiful!

Denise
MyPenNameIsSam
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7 posted 03-21-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

empathy....it's wonderful to know those who have it  
   Terrific poem, Daniella    Thanks for sharing and welcome to Passions!  
-molly aka sam

 Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield


Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
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8 posted 03-21-2000 02:47 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very nice poem.  Welcome to Passions.
Daniella is one of my favorite names.
A Romantic Heart
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since 09-03-99
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Forever In Your Heart


9 posted 03-21-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

WELCOME! to passions!!!!

I felt this was written for a friend or parents,maybe a boyfriend...reminds me of the song...Wind Beneath my wings! Great poem!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Marina
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10 posted 03-21-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Nice writing Daniella!  Welcome to Passions!

Marina
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Welcome to passions  
Daniella
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since 03-21-2000
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WA


12 posted 03-22-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for Daniella   Email Daniella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniella

Thank you all for reading my first poem submitted.  I wrote this when I was a teenager about my best friend, who is now my husband.
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