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Sven
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0 posted 03-21-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Lady of my heart
Where do I start?
You are the part
Your love the art

Show me the sky
Teach me to fly
Take me so high
Our love the tie

My love for you
Not old, quite new
Fills my heart too
As love can do

Our love this night
Casts a bright light
Your eyes, my sight
Just feels so right

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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1 posted 03-21-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very lovingly put Sven...simple love is always the best of all...

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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2 posted 03-21-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

I really like your shorter version and your rhyme sceme here Sven.  Simply and well put.

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very well written.

Simplicity is sometimes the easiest way to express things

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4 posted 03-21-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Simple, yet wonderfully put.  Love in the most basic form, Sven.  Well done.

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Short and sweet, yet speaks volumes of emotion and yearning.  Well done  

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Short and sweet  
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Thank you all my friends. . . sometimes simple is the way to go. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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