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Mischief in the night

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Seymour Tabin
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    Mischief in the night

Into the silence of the night,
Where sleeps shadows of the light,
Walks a restless mind in gleam,
With the treasures of her dream.

Placing wonders that are grand,
On the keyboard with her hand.
Floating cobwebs into space,
With a smile upon her face.

Delighted with the thoughts that fly
Across the room and through the sky,
To settle in a warm embrace.
Another room, another place.

And with the softness of her words
Frees a flight of humming birds.
To fly about her lovers bed.
To fly into her lovers head.

And there in dream her lover smiles,
As fertile thoughts, entice with wiles.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-20-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

ooh seymoure you little mischief maker...
this is SO great...
I love this poem it mystic and cryptic and  its about my fav thing..cyberlove
very nice...

Placing wonders that are grand,
On the keyboard with her hand.
Floating cobwebs into space,
With a smile upon her face.

Delighted with the thoughts that fly
Across the room and through the sky,
To settle in a warm embrace.
Another room, another place.

great writing in this one...
take care jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


Martie
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2 posted 03-20-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sy, to express the words for this
like the first sweet lover's kiss...
vintage flavor and boquet
just more then I can say today.
Balladeer
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3 posted 03-20-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I couldn't agree more. You've outdone yourself with this one, Sy. Perfect wording presented perfectly (don't ask me to say that 3 times fast). This is as excellent as it gets.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 03-20-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

This is wonderful!!! you have done an amazing job Sy!!
Seymour Tabin
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Janet, Thank you for the mystic, cryptic and great. Sy

Martie, Your comments are the greatest. *L*

Balladeer, I'm putting your excellent in the bank, Thanks.

Butterfly, Thank you so much for the wonderful. Sy
Meadowmuse
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6 posted 03-21-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

A taste of shadows' song surreal
from lover's sway and longing feel

...this is beautiful, Sy, and sets my soul to longing.

~ Claire
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 03-21-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
You amaze me more and more. Just when I think you're at your best, it gets better. This is superb writing to say the least. Keep writing, dear friend
Love ya
Liz
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 03-21-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Seymour,

You tickled the ivory of delight
with melodies played in the night.
Lovers caught within the web
of notes sent dancing in lover's head.

Beautiful, maestro!
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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Seymore...this is absolutely delightful  
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 03-21-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Meadow, And I love your writing too, thank you. *L*

Elizabeth, Your comment warms my heart and what ever else there is to warm. Love ya Sy

Marge, Wonderful comment, thank you love.

Hoot, Delighting you is my pleasure. *L*
MyPenNameIsSam
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11 posted 03-21-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

beautiful wording seymour  
-molly aka sam

 Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield


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Perfection, Seymour!  I think we have all done a bit of this magic!
Seymour Tabin
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Sam, Thank you molly aka sam.

Serenity, Thank you so much for the wonderful
comment. *L*
 
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