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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 03-20-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Deep into the forest,
Dark secluded place,

You and I share a secret,
A warm passionate embrace,

Tropical smells all around,
gently we lay upon the ground,

You kiss my cheek and pull back my hair,
I am lost inside your lovers stare,

You take my hand and lead underneath this waterfall,
Drops of warm soothing water,big and small,

Falling all over my body like rain in the summertime,
As I am falling into your poetry and rhyme,

You whisper I love you, I want you, You are my one desire,
I need this cool water to help control this fire,

Fire of love burning hot inside,
My love for you I cannot hide,

I dream of this fantasy,
A place I often recall,

Where your with me,
underneath the waterfall.


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-20-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Romantic and passionate! Beautiful!  

Denise
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 03-20-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Denise!!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Janet Marie
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3 posted 03-20-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

sigh  very nice...its still warm in here...spring fever going strong...
beautiful sweet poem lovely imagery RM
jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


Loneheart
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4 posted 03-20-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Such a beautiful  portrait has thy hand created
young maid
It truly touches ones heart
and from one so young
Surely all the young Knights
shall be at thy castle door with this one
Heart  
Ah the spirit of youth I do miss it so.

 Loneheart
JamesMichael
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5 posted 03-22-2000 05:40 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I love the part..."tropical smells all around..gently we lay upon the ground."  Lovely romantic thoughts beyond compare.   James
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6 posted 03-22-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How romantic  
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 03-22-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thank you miss Marie...yeah its spring still hot in here! hehe...turn on the air condition!lol!  

Lone thank you for your replies, if I can be half as good a poet as you I will be blessed!

James your a sweetheart!!!glad you enjoyed the journey!  

Hoot: I am very honered that you like it and thought it to be romantic!  


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-22-2000).]
Lone Wolf
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8 posted 03-22-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

RH....do you have it bad or what??  Loved each word of this.  You express your feelings so well.  He is lucky indeed!!  Romance, passion, mystery...wow!!!     

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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9 posted 03-22-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Lone...I am hopeing and wishing for this kind of love...writing poems such as these are my dreams...my hopes of having this kind of love....!

I would have it bad if only someone would have it this bad for me...by the way...I like Michael w. Smith!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

David2
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10 posted 03-23-2000 01:52 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Romantic Heart,
    I pray there is someone close to you that benefits from your obvious passions, these works of yours are beautiful.

I dream of this fantasy,
A place I often recall,

Where your with me,
underneath the waterfall.

These lines are particularly moving.

David2





PhaerieChild
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11 posted 03-23-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Romantic Heart...you certainly lived up to your pen name with this one. Truly beautiful!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


A Romantic Heart
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12 posted 03-23-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

David...due to circumstances at the moment...well, I guess my passion will just have to be displayed here for all of you standing by to receive it! as long as your enjoying it ?
Beautiful...I am blushing! Yours is beautiful as well!

Wild child:Thanks for saying I am who I am...this is me!What you see is what you get..


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

Danny Holloway
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13 posted 03-23-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This makes me want to run out and find a waterfall and take a sweetheart along.
So romantic this is, "falling all over my body like rain in the summertime".
sensual for sure,
Well done.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
Nativetexan2
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14 posted 03-23-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for Nativetexan2   Email Nativetexan2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nativetexan2

Heart, Such moving words. You certainly have a way with them. I could actually feel the spray of the waterfall. Keep up the good work for all of us hopeless romantics(or should I say hopeful.

Rich
Michael
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15 posted 03-23-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Can't get more romantic than that.  One of my fovorite places in the world to be is underneath a waterfall.  Beautiful poem.

Michael
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16 posted 03-23-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Danny,Native, and Michael, thats for your replies! under the waterfall is one of my favorite places to be its one of my daydreams....being sensual is part of being a poetess!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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17 posted 03-23-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Sounds like a beautiful place to be!

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Elizabeth Santos
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18 posted 03-23-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I certainly think your name fits your poetry. Each one seems more romantic than the last. Very tender and wonderful,dear poet
Liz
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19 posted 03-23-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Sweet, lovely, and so romantic.  I enjoyed this very much.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


A Romantic Heart
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20 posted 03-24-2000 04:05 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Elizabeth: thanks for reading!

Elizabeth santos: Thanks for the compliment!

Krista: Thank you, glad you enjoyed!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

AndreaA02
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21 posted 03-24-2000 05:07 AM       View Profile for AndreaA02   Email AndreaA02   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AndreaA02

Perfect poem for the new season! Loved it!
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