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I sit down and stare
And what do I see?
A strong, young woman
Where a child used to be.

She looks oh so graceful
With a smile that is kind
You can see in her face
She has an intelligent mind.

It seems she knows where she's going in life
Not seemingly lost
She takes great chances
No matter the cost.

Suddenly, she sees me
She looks over with surprise
She must have felt my presence
I see it in her eyes.

We smile to each other
Like there's some secret that we share
Nobody else seems to know
But I know she's there.

As I reach out to this girl
My thoughts are all misled
For as I try to touch her
I feel a mirror instead.

MY BABY PICTURE:   ain't I cute!? hehe


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Denise
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1 posted 03-20-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is just wonderful, Blondie! Great ending too! Love the baby pic! hehehe  

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Blondie
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2 posted 03-20-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blondie

Thanks so much Denise, I think I was a mover and a shaker when I was younger, don't you think?  
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that was great!
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4 posted 03-21-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Blondie: I can relate to this..

HUGS
Blondie
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5 posted 03-21-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blondie

Thanks you too  
U K Hero
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well written, and love the baby pic'
Blondie
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7 posted 03-21-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blondie

lol...my mom always said I was an ugly baby but I never knew  
Cutie Putootie
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WONDERFUL work as always Melissa!  Keep it up, looks like the forum is filling up with this extravagent work, I'm really amazed no one responded to the Teatime War...
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9 posted 03-21-2000 07:59 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blondie

Cutie~
I am too, I really thought I might have gotten a better response but oh well...this one I actually wrote last night when I couldn't sleep and I thought it wasn't that good...but by telling from the response I guess it was  
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