»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #6
»
Lonliness
| Open Poetry #6 |
|
Lonliness |
|
|
gingin New Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 1 |
I leave myself open Hoping love will come in A whisper, a touch is all I need for my love to begin My feelings grow deeper Led blindly by the thought alone That one day I will love someone Someone to call my own But in this crazy circumstance My eyes have failed to see The lonliness I have caused myself To think that anyone would love me |
||
| © Copyright 2000 gingin - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Gingin! This is a very sad yet beautiful poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome!! A slice of pain is always easier when you release it. This is a subject I know well and your work captured it well. Whatever strength I add to myself becomes my greatest weakness, while whatever weakness I'll consciously endure will be replaced with a strength that is not my own. G. Finley |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! Great poem! You are worth loving always  |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good poem...keep looking, there is someone out there for everyone...but you first have to be happy with who YOU are!  |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hi gin, and welcome...i love this poem...it is sadly beautiful... I leave myself open Hoping love will come in A whisper, a touch is all I need for my love to begin ---------- you express you pain with grace, take care,jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
gingin--liked this much! Reminded me of an old Groucho Marx line--ouch, serenity betrays her age--"I wouldn't join any club that would have me as a member..." I understand, and believe me, there is Hope. (couldn't resist, says the imp!) Welcome to the forum! |
||
|
Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Don't look my friend for love searches not those who seek ,but rather, those who wait. your poem was sad but I liked it and look forward to reading more of your work. Raven |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
OMIGOSH i just had to comment on yur name i used to run around sayin gin gin all my days in school like a madman cuz peeps loved to laugh AT me when i did...thuz like the name of the dog on i dream o jeanie!!! the poem kicked too loved it! |
||
|
Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
I know exactly how you feel. The poem speaks out to me in ways I could never express. Very well written\. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
