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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-03-20 02:54 AM


My Heart is a deep blue ocean,
The waves are its emotions,

Crystal clear is my devotion,
Of my love for you,

Sun aglow upon your face,
Is evidence of loves embrace,

Deep is my love for you,
Dark, mysterious and blue,

Water a looking glass,
A reflection of times past,

Memories of you and I together,
Memories to last forever,

Storms my come and toss us to and fro,
Safe inside your arms is where I'll go,

Through all of lifes comotion...

I will place my anchor into your heart,
My deep blue ocean!


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 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-20-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-03-20 02:58 AM


Lovely thoughts..makes me want to go scuba diving.  James
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2 posted 2000-03-20 03:10 AM


Eomantic Heart~
Lovely thoughts.
'Water a looking glass,
A reflection of times past'
~*Marge*~


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Loneheart
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3 posted 2000-03-20 05:01 PM


Very nice
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-03-20 05:55 PM


Thank you for reading Lone,I always appreciate your comments!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Denise
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5 posted 2000-03-20 09:02 PM


I'd have to say that this is my favorite of yours to date and I ditto all the above replies!  

Denise

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2000-03-20 09:23 PM


Thanks Denise! I am glad you liked it!!! and that it is your favorite!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Butterflies_dont_cry
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Michigan
7 posted 2000-03-20 09:27 PM


Done with class and charm...and very deep  
I loved it!!

Corinne
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state of confusion
8 posted 2000-03-20 09:37 PM


hmm, Blue Ocean, now Deep Blue Ocean!

Coincidence???

Nice poem, btw.

Cor

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2000-03-20 10:34 PM


thank you butterfly!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2000-03-20 10:41 PM


Cor-yes it is a coincidence...hmmm must be on the same wave length!haha! Thanks for reading!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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